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  • Lady of the Moon

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    Thanks for the comment once more. :)

    Oh there will be, I know exactly how it'll be all planned out, I just have to figure out where to put it into the story. It's going to be interesting.

    Thanks again! :)
    July 28th, 2011 at 03:26pm
  • Lady of the Moon

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    Thanks for the comment once more. :)

    I'm happy you felt that the last update wasn't dry, even if the writer did/does. It just took me a long time to write.

    I'm also happy that you like the appearance of original characters. It's going to be fun to write when that time comes. :)

    Thanks again! :)
    July 25th, 2011 at 02:29pm
  • Lady of the Moon

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    Thanks for the comment once more. :)

    I got a nice chuckle out of it. And yes, I'm kind of (well, more like I am) an erotic writer, so of course there will be some sexual scenes in the story. ;)

    I'm happy you love my updates though, that makes me even more happy. :)

    Thanks again!
    July 20th, 2011 at 02:29am
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    Thanks for the commen on How To Save A Life. I'm so glad you like it :)
    July 15th, 2011 at 05:18pm
  • Lady of the Moon

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    Thanks for the comment once more. :)

    Awesome, if you would message me your email address, I can send you chapters one and two. Although I will forewarn you that I probably won't be sending the out the revised editions often, but I will be making the slow trek. :)

    Thanks again! :)
    July 14th, 2011 at 02:33pm
  • Lady of the Moon

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    Thanks for the comment once more. :)

    I actually haven't fully thought it out yet, I'm still deciding. If anything, the reason why they haven't seen one another was because they haven't had the time. I'm still debating though, and I do know in one of the later chapters, Luke will be making an appearance. It might be after the break chapter (chapter five to chapter six), but he will be appearing, and telling Lily what he thinks.

    Thanks again! :)
    July 10th, 2011 at 05:33pm
  • Lady of the Moon

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    That's fine, I actually like reader's constructive criticism because it shows myself that I'm only human. But I'm also one to want to destroy my writing because I think it's shit.

    And I have a few publishers saved in a Word document that I'm going to try, they're all online and erotic publishers. And I look at it this way, if shitty authors can get published, I should be able to also. :)
    July 8th, 2011 at 01:58pm
  • Lady of the Moon

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    Thanks for the comment once more. :)

    Haha, yeah I tend to recycle words A LOT. It's kine of a bad habit with me, but I also don't want to be blunt with the whole scene either. I don't know, that's just me. But also look at it this way, it's just the first draft and if I do get the first part published, and they want to publish the whole series, the words will more than likely be fixed. I know when I go through and edit this one like what I did with the first, and what I'll do with the second, I'll completely shred it.

    But thanks again for the comment, and I do plan on updating sometime in the near, near future. :)
    July 7th, 2011 at 08:42pm
  • foREVer_love

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    hahaha it's all good. Thanks for commenting :D
    July 6th, 2011 at 01:13pm
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    Just wanted to let you know I have a new Matt Sanders story up, if you have time to check it out that would be awesome:D
    July 5th, 2011 at 03:53pm
  • Lady of the Moon

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    It's nice to read your comments on "Temptress of Paris". :)

    Haha, yeah it probably won't be for a while, but he will, don't worry. ;)

    It's going to be fun, I'm kind of glade I'll be going home tomorrow, because I have ideas, and I'm excited to write. The only downside of leaving the state and not having a working laptop. Oh well, at least I can still write lol. :)
    July 4th, 2011 at 01:22am
  • Lady of the Moon

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    Thanks for the comment once more. :)

    Haha, I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter's kinkier side. ;) That makes me happy, and I missed writing about it also.

    Yeah, the next update will probably be on Wednesday, all because I'm out of state. It's okay though, I have a few ideas running through my head, and it's always good to get away for a few days.

    Haha, and don't worry, Matthieu will do something drastic. ;)

    Thanks again! :)
    July 3rd, 2011 at 02:16am
  • Lady of the Moon

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    Thanks for the comment once more. :)

    Haha, yay! Makes me happy I'm not the only geek out there, hahaha. :)

    Oh don't worry, as the story progresses, there will some, how should I say this, more "interesting" things in the sexual department. I haven't completely abandoned the idea of bizarre sexual pleasure. ;)

    Thanks again! :)
    June 30th, 2011 at 07:42pm
  • Lady of the Moon

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    Thanks for the comment once more. :)

    Haha, there will be many ways to deal with the Germans throughout the story. ;) I have a lot planned for Amand and another one that hasn't been introduced yet. It's going to be fun. :)

    Thanks again! :)
    June 29th, 2011 at 03:03pm
  • Lady of the Moon

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    It's one of those, I could do it, creep some of the readers out and throw in a twist, but I could do it. It'd be interesting to do, but I don't think I could make him just full out sleep with her. I might just make him really attracted to her when he makes his appearance. Have it like end with him giving her a romantic kiss or something.

    It's an idea because she isn't technically his birth daughter, as you've stated. He's just the father figure who raised her. It's an idea. :)
    June 28th, 2011 at 03:30pm
  • Lady of the Moon

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    Thanks for the comment on "Temptress of Paris" also. :)

    It's an idea, and I might do it after the vignette about Rosemary's early life, before Ash and Luke came into the picture. It's an idea, and I'm actually happy that you suggested it to me, but I left it completely open with the ending of "Lilies" because that's what I chose to do, let the readers think.

    As for Luke knowing or not knowing, I haven't gotten that far yet with the whole writing aspect, but he WILL be making an appearance somewhere in the story, along with Ella. And as for her becoming his, I could make it happen, but I also have other plans regarding who she'll end up with, well, in love with.

    Thanks for the ideas though, they've gotten me into creative think mode, if there is such a thing, but they're sparking ideas right now, and I might just run with a few. :)

    Thanks again!
    June 28th, 2011 at 03:21pm
  • Lady of the Moon

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    Thanks for the comment on "Lilies". :)

    Haha, I don't know if that's a good thing or a bad thing, but it's understandable, I was like that with a few stories I found. Sadly though, I haven't found any since really.

    Thanks again! :)
    June 28th, 2011 at 03:14pm
  • Lady of the Moon

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    Thanks for the comment on "Darker Side". :)

    Haha, yeah, I was a mean writer with that one, a lot of readers were upset with me when I killed him (hahaha, I sound like a murder, well, I sort of am, with my characters. Hahahahaha, sorry about that!). But it is explained in the sequel, and he does make appearances in the second half of it.

    Thanks for the comment, and I'm happy you enjoyed it! :)
    June 27th, 2011 at 04:22pm
  • ManicFame

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    sweet! glad you like them :)
    im working on a brian oneshot right now, but after that idk which story i'll update next
    June 23rd, 2011 at 03:10am
  • ManicFame

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    ahaha. id be torn between matt and brian. but maybe i wouldnt have to choose..... *wink, wink*

    AHAHAHAHA!
    June 23rd, 2011 at 03:05am