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Hellooo darl'
How're you?
xox

no problem :D and omg i hope you do!!! :D

Awwwww your welcome (:
and aw, i hope you do! but if you dont it was an amazing story (:

i love your updates :) they make my day :)
yeah, its okay my brother is just a turd lol
yeah i hate people like that too
and i titally understand, especially since i do it alot too xDDD

Gerard is a bit of an intriguing enigma, isn’t he? He does usually make for the most interesting characters/

It doesn’t matter how long you take to read it, just as long as you get around to it, ha. I love sitting down and really reading your updates, to make sure I take it all in and have appropriate things to comment about.

It’s a British charity that raises money to build cancer centres specifically catered to teenagers. They do a lot of work to make teenagers feel safe and happy while dealing with a horrible disease. I did my skydive on Saturday, it was terrifying, I honestly did not like the free fall bit because for about 30 seconds I couldn’t breathe, and I panicked. The parachute bit was fun (as the instructor pointed out his local Tesco, lol) and I was allowed to steer a bit.

I’m thinking about venturing back to livejournal, I’m Finky_Way on there and I used to post Torchwood Fanfic back in 2008, but I’ve started this MCR_Bingo challenge community which is quite fun, I’ve written stuff for it but not posted yet. I’m on Ficwad too as XrayPineapple, but I don’t think I ever posted on there… it’s hard enough keeping up with Mibba let alone anything else. Don’t know about that last site, is it good?

He is! Your Frank is perfect! Of course Frank wouldn’t be all ‘come back Gee’ that shit only happens in crapy fanfics… why would you throw everything away for a guy you’ve only just started dating?

I’ve never tried coke… but I can see it, and that was like the oddest fuck off thing he could do… just walking? Ha.

I’m not being sweet, I’m telling the truth! So suck it up, you’re writing is brilliant and you don’t usually find that around these parts. Enjoy the praise.

A huge shocker? Now I’m intrigued!

Hopefully updating everything soon. But I just got really caught up in this idea I had at work on Friday (I wrote 2000 words of it while working, ha!) Basically, you know The Breakfast Club? Well, bunch of archetypal teens have detention, they start off hating each other, in the end they change their views. So I thought I’d try a bit of modern day one and then explore how they change, if they really change, and how they are with each other after the detention. Its MCR fanfiction at the moment, and it’s got Bob in it cause I need five people and he’s my favourite drummer, still. And then I’ve also gone and done Girl!Ray and Girl!Mikey for the first time ever, which I don’t know how people will react to. But I like it.

That's the only way I can write sex with MCR members without falling on the floor laughing! I can't wait to get further into Gerard's twisted mind, to try and understand why he's putting himself through this.

You're making me squee so much! I love you <3

I'm sorry I haven't read your story yet, I've had a house guest for a week and had to play good host, I need to catch up on so much, but tonight is all about canvassing for my skydive for Teenage Cancer Trust I'm doing on Saturday, I've only raised £53 so far, I'm not doing too great :s

im so excited now :DDDDD

I find sex is pretty easy to write... a series of physical acts that leads to a mini explosion, lol. I think you've done a superb job getting into the mind of an addict, Gerard is a beautiful character.

Ending on a downer isn't so bad, it just makes us want there to be happier things to come.

I saw that you updated, I'm definitely going to have to check that out tomorrow!

Favourite story in the whole damn world? Are you serious! *squee* Thankies.

no problemo :)
and yaaay!!!!

I think the first comment had different points I wanted to make :s there was just so much going through my head!

Its good that you're thinking about the readers while you're writing, thinking about how they'd feel and react to certain statements. It just doesn't seem like Gerard's character would do anything without thinking about it first, or at least justifying it to himself somehow. He shouldn't let the drugs cloud his judgement, that would be epically stupid on his part, grr!

That Frank is my favourite character to read :D You're right, he's so many different things rolled into one and it makes him so real! Fierce, lol? Totally! I can't wait to see this drama! I bet it's going to be amazing :D

My internet is really bad at the moment, I'm struggling with it, evil thing. I will get around to reading your update soon, promise, but I will do it! When it cooperates!

I have no idea about my 'brilliant' story... still in the making....

It's my pleasure to comment on your story, I honestly do love it :D And I can't wait to get around to reading the new chapter (I've had no internet for ages :()

It's good to be mad at your own characters, it means you're writing them write :D

I understand what you mean about getting too close to characters, I have that problem too, and seeing it from an outsiders perspective is so refreshing and helpful.

I wish it wasn't so, I wish the love was spread equally. But its also a case of advertising too and having the time to do the rounds and draw people in and reply to comments and stuff.

I just updated Gerard's Game, its 6100 words of... evil, honestly, I'm actually kind of worried how that turned out... but I hope you enjoy it.

You don't even have to thank me, bb :3 I read it very willingly (:
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no problemo :) i like that story so much!!! and i can't wait till there's more :DDD

That's what I love most from the comments, seeing what other people think about my characters and the world I've created. I don't want pointless things, I mean, it's nice that they're reading and they love it, but I want to know why, and if they don't like it, I definitely want to know why and how I can improve.

I don't understand that either! Maybe because these unoriginal badly written ones are updated regularly and are full of drama and smut and have really short chapters with not a lot of description and are just straight to the point.

I've got 4053 words of the next chapter of Gerard's Game and its not finished yet, unfortunately this is going to be a very long chapter... sorry.

Miss you bb girl! <3
xxxx

You're welcome, I'm just saying what I see, your characters and your writing are doing all the hard work, I'm just sitting here and enjoying it. Your characters are so well formed. Sometimes my readers show me things about my characters I didn't realise either so I'm glad to be returning the favour.

I didn't get my 30 comments to update tomorrow, so it should be some time next week for Gerard's Game. And it is? *swoons* thank you so much!

You're welcome, I really enjoyed it. And you can already see how much Frank's background is affecting him as a person, he's friendly but rightly guarded. I can't wait to see how much it affects him in the course of the story.

Ahh yeah 20 more days. And yes i am seeing them in October but its in October! I wanna see them now xD But you got fired??!! :( and nose pierced??!! Im just waiting 'til i move out so i can get a piercing or maybe even a tattoo but we shall see on the tattoo. You better let me know how the concert goes 'cause i think yours is way before mine xD

Ahhh July 23rd! Im so freaking excited!!!!! It's like MCR again though it would be really cool to see them in Europe, sadly they wont be there when im there :( so hows life in New York love?