Thanks for commenting on The Poet Sings! And haha I know right, Ryan acts awkward. I don't know, I just picture him like that. As weird as that is.. Oh and I'm hoping I'm able to get quick updates out too!
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I'm so glad that you enjoy my comments! Thank you for giving me such excellent content to comment on! I can't wait to see what you come up with for Max! :)
Thank you so much for the comment on The Fear is Paralyzing! I'm glad you like the concept. I've had the idea for a long time, I've changed the main character and even sports that it deals with a bunch of times before finally deciding on the version it is now!
Ahh! Thank you so much :3 I always worried that they were TOO long. It's really amazing how much you can write and not even realize it! But I hope you like the rest of it :]]
I am commenting again one, because I am bored and two, because I hit the wrong button (again because that led to my deleted first take of that long comment). BUT ANYWAY the point of this one is, I checked your stories, commented, pushed the wrong button, and low and behold their is a Kris update. You have awesome timing! :)
Well I had this super long awesome comment, but my comment so here comes take two. I'm glad you appreciate my comments! I try to be helpful because I am a writer and I know how much specific things can help in reviews. My friend told me once that you should review everything you read because that's how you help a person learn to be a better writer.
I think I would go with Jordan's point of view. I would like to know what he is thinking. I do not believe his character is meant to be as vicious as he is. Like James said, no one really understands Ariana or what she is thinking. I think this is what obviously happened to Jordan along the way some where. He either misunderstood something she said or got caught in the crossfire of her depression and took it way too personal. Actually, it could very well be both. James said that friends don't simply drift apart, so that leads me to bellieve some action took place and then Ariana confirms that mean things were said so that means he did take it very personally.
Though with all that being said, if you decide to go with Craig, I'd love it too. He's like the perfect big brother type character and I love reading his point of view also. I hope this helped. I feel like I made confusion and not a case. Good luck writing the next chapter!