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haha I do the same thing all the time

I am commenting again one, because I am bored and two, because I hit the wrong button (again because that led to my deleted first take of that long comment). BUT ANYWAY the point of this one is, I checked your stories, commented, pushed the wrong button, and low and behold their is a Kris update. You have awesome timing! :)

Well I had this super long awesome comment, but my comment so here comes take two. I'm glad you appreciate my comments! I try to be helpful because I am a writer and I know how much specific things can help in reviews. My friend told me once that you should review everything you read because that's how you help a person learn to be a better writer.

I think I would go with Jordan's point of view. I would like to know what he is thinking. I do not believe his character is meant to be as vicious as he is. Like James said, no one really understands Ariana or what she is thinking. I think this is what obviously happened to Jordan along the way some where. He either misunderstood something she said or got caught in the crossfire of her depression and took it way too personal. Actually, it could very well be both. James said that friends don't simply drift apart, so that leads me to bellieve some action took place and then Ariana confirms that mean things were said so that means he did take it very personally.

Though with all that being said, if you decide to go with Craig, I'd love it too. He's like the perfect big brother type character and I love reading his point of view also. I hope this helped. I feel like I made confusion and not a case. Good luck writing the next chapter!

That's awesome! Not a lot of authors really seem to like that interaction too much. And I find your version of Craig to be pretty dead on as to what I assume he's really like.

Thanks again!

You're more than welcome! The quality of your writing makes every chapter worth the wait. I'd love to read Jordan's POV but if you decide to go with Craig, I'd still be delighted. I mean, we haven't really found out the reasoning behind Jordan's feelings towards her yet and if we've still got a ways to go before we find out, I think I'd prefer Craig. Plus, he's one of my favorite characters. But whatever you decide, I know I'll enjoy reading it! You haven't let me down thus far. Thanks so much for responding to my comment! :)

I love your james neal story! I get so antsy waiting for updates! your writing style is terrific, I love how you can draw people into ariana's head and feel all the emotions she does. keep it up~

Oh no it's totally alright. I always seem to read stories with a little cheating involved, but they're so good! I just feel so bad for who gets cheated on! I don't want to suggest anything because I really want to see how Jordan can make it up to her. I would be SO hurt and I wouldn't trust him again, but I think they have a different relationship than I would.

Really? That's bizarre...

Due to my "extensive" research on Kris's French Wikipedia page that is her name. That's also where I found Kris's step dad and biological father's names. I don't know if that's actually accurate but w/e it's fiction right?

So this is probably random and awkward but you are really pretty! And you are a really good writer! :)

Yes!!!! Thank you! It's funny how I am exactly like that in real life!

I just wanted to inform you that I have read every single one of your stories and stalk them to see when they are updated, that's how much I love them, especially the James Neal one because he is just beast. I think you are a really talented writer and can definitely draw people in with anything you write. You make your stories interesting and very relatable. I feel very close to the main character in the Neal story, Ariana and I really enjoy that about your characters. The other thing I look for in a story is how well the characters interact with each and I believe your characters are terrific. The way they interact is believable and touching at the same time and I love every minute of it. I just wanted to let you know because you're awesome and you should know it :)

Thanks for the comment! I'll probably post some more stories soon. x

Don't forget your entry for my NHL contest is due in 13 days!
Here's the link if needed.
http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/174574/

best of luck,
Josephine

Nice to meet you! I haven't been on the actual site much...(busy working on my first contest entry!) So no questions yet...but thanks so much! ^-^

I love Time!! I hope you update it soonnnnnnnn!!!! :)

Hi! Your story Time is AMAZING! I've read it twice already and I'm so excited to see what's going to happen next. I check back like everyday for an update. It's actually really easy to relate to it.

Hi :D I have been reading your stories Breathe Me, and Keep the Lights on, and i just wanted to tell you they are aboslutley amazing! Your are an amazing writer, looking forward to your updates as always!

Hey! Just a reminder that you have 1 week until the deadine for my contest (April 1). If you need an extension or have to drop out for any reason, just let me know!

Here's the link to the contest: http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/173880/

It was a good wow. It always is if I use that comment on a chapter. Also, you're welcome!