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    You damn right.
    September 25th, 2016 at 10:15pm
  • Skyscraper

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    November 30th, 2012 at 05:17am
  • hephaestus

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    September 10th, 2012 at 04:47pm
  • hephaestus

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    Very true.
    And the story idea has a lot of things that need to be worked out first before anything happens with it lol
    September 8th, 2012 at 09:49pm
  • hephaestus

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    Oh lol.
    But yes.
    It was just simpler for me to explain the Purge part of it.
    September 8th, 2012 at 07:41pm
  • hephaestus

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    He/She would be someone with the anima.
    I was thinking like a group of main characters though.
    Have you heard of Final Fantasy XIII? Well they do this thing called the Purge where they take all these infected people and kill them in a faraway location. I was thinking it could be like, kind of, but they escaped and are sturggling to find a safe haven. That or they end up trying to take on their oppressors.
    September 8th, 2012 at 02:06pm
  • hephaestus

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    It's only a shakey foothold of a story.

    Basically there is a society made up of humans, and then two special kinds of people- superhumans (we can name them something else. And really, they're only 'super' because they are much stronger, faster, etc than the average human) and then there are those who have the anima. These people would be human, but at one point of their body, a colored stream of energy leaves there body and then reenters at another point on their body. These people, the energy that follows through them, gives them the capability to transform their shape into that of one select animal. However, they are more emotional and a potential danger to the other two races. So, the government is hellbent on killing them off. Sort of like a genocide thing...

    Its just an idea, feel free to shoot it down or suggest things to make it better.
    September 7th, 2012 at 04:32am
  • hephaestus

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    I have an idea, but it's more of a sic-fi fantasy thing,
    but if you have any ideas that would be great
    September 7th, 2012 at 03:56am
  • hephaestus

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    Lol, totally understandable.
    I love fantasy too. My story Birdie clearly shows that, lol.
    Plus, you're a great writer and I'd love to work with you.
    September 5th, 2012 at 05:39am
  • hephaestus

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    Okay, editing should take another day or two (the process is completely shit, if I say so myself, lol.)
    But really? Would you?
    I'd love to, if you wanted!
    September 5th, 2012 at 05:31am
  • hephaestus

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    Hey, I've finished The Core!
    As well as its review, and it is currently in editing.
    If you could talk to your co-author or just decide for yourself, I would like you to find an image to represent the story, to act as the "cover" image. If you can't find anything, I'll come up with something.

    It was a pleasure to read this story and I am looking forward to more updates! Also, if you ever do a fantasy co-write again, keep me in mind for a co-author, alright? Wink

    Lol, thank you!
    September 5th, 2012 at 05:09am
  • hephaestus

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    I like it, though the story itself (so far, for me, anyway) has lacked a certain presence of The Core. Perhaps when it's completed, you could find a great new title. I like 'The Core' though :)
    August 30th, 2012 at 06:35am
  • hephaestus

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    Lol, I was curious. I was looking ahead at author's notes.
    August 30th, 2012 at 06:17am
  • hephaestus

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    Lol, I love it. It deserves much more praise.
    Hell, if you want more suggestions and stuff, once I'm finished with the reading, you can turn to me for those, lol.
    You're both very talented and make me want to co-write with each of you, aha.

    But anyway I love The Core.
    By the way, what was the title originally?
    August 30th, 2012 at 05:21am
  • hephaestus

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    Sorry if those comments came off rude or something. :/
    And okay, yeah.
    Lol, okay, I get it now. At this point, I had assumed that Lyrius was married to both Helena and Rhiana, and Andor and Tylon were half brothers. Hey, it could happen, aha.
    August 30th, 2012 at 03:54am
  • hephaestus

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    No problem, at all.
    Your story is so, so very outstanding.
    You both deserve this.
    August 30th, 2012 at 03:42am
  • hephaestus

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    Well, get ready to be extremely happy.
    I love your guys's work so far, truly, and shall be reviewing each chapter until I am finished.
    On top of that, if you look to the right, you will see that I am on the Mibba Magazine staff and have chosen your story to review as one of my mandatory weekly reviews!
    August 30th, 2012 at 01:00am
  • nearly witches.

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    Thank you for your lovely comment on Unit 731 ^^
    August 16th, 2012 at 11:42am
  • call of the wild

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    Thank you so much for the comment on Maybe Someday. The quote is from Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. Johnny Depp says it in his weird little intro speech before going into the factory. It's one of my favorites...
    August 16th, 2012 at 04:12am
  • squidward tentacles.

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    Thank you so much for the lovely comment on my story Red Red Revenge! :)
    August 12th, 2012 at 01:10am