He/She would be someone with the anima. I was thinking like a group of main characters though. Have you heard of Final Fantasy XIII? Well they do this thing called the Purge where they take all these infected people and kill them in a faraway location. I was thinking it could be like, kind of, but they escaped and are sturggling to find a safe haven. That or they end up trying to take on their oppressors.
Basically there is a society made up of humans, and then two special kinds of people- superhumans (we can name them something else. And really, they're only 'super' because they are much stronger, faster, etc than the average human) and then there are those who have the anima. These people would be human, but at one point of their body, a colored stream of energy leaves there body and then reenters at another point on their body. These people, the energy that follows through them, gives them the capability to transform their shape into that of one select animal. However, they are more emotional and a potential danger to the other two races. So, the government is hellbent on killing them off. Sort of like a genocide thing...
Its just an idea, feel free to shoot it down or suggest things to make it better.
Okay, editing should take another day or two (the process is completely shit, if I say so myself, lol.) But really? Would you? I'd love to, if you wanted!
Hey, I've finished The Core! As well as its review, and it is currently in editing. If you could talk to your co-author or just decide for yourself, I would like you to find an image to represent the story, to act as the "cover" image. If you can't find anything, I'll come up with something.
It was a pleasure to read this story and I am looking forward to more updates! Also, if you ever do a fantasy co-write again, keep me in mind for a co-author, alright?
I like it, though the story itself (so far, for me, anyway) has lacked a certain presence of The Core. Perhaps when it's completed, you could find a great new title. I like 'The Core' though :)
Lol, I love it. It deserves much more praise. Hell, if you want more suggestions and stuff, once I'm finished with the reading, you can turn to me for those, lol. You're both very talented and make me want to co-write with each of you, aha.
But anyway I love The Core. By the way, what was the title originally?
Sorry if those comments came off rude or something. :/ And okay, yeah. Lol, okay, I get it now. At this point, I had assumed that Lyrius was married to both Helena and Rhiana, and Andor and Tylon were half brothers. Hey, it could happen, aha.
Well, get ready to be extremely happy. I love your guys's work so far, truly, and shall be reviewing each chapter until I am finished. On top of that, if you look to the right, you will see that I am on the Mibba Magazine staff and have chosen your story to review as one of my mandatory weekly reviews!
Thank you so much for the comment on Maybe Someday. The quote is from Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. Johnny Depp says it in his weird little intro speech before going into the factory. It's one of my favorites...