(This is just what I'm working on It's only an hours worth of work and I wanted to know if it was worth putting the time and effort in to making it better. So I put it up on here for you guys to read and tell me how much it sucks ^.^)I'm so glad you came, the story would have been different without you. I know you're wondering what I'm talking about. This is supposed to be a retelling of some...