People have said it needs to be longer so, give me a week at the most to make the next chapter alot longer.The first two chapters were just to see if people would like it, its seem's you do so, i will continue.The reason my grammer ain't that well is cause i have dislexia, and havent had support,thank you so much for the feedback it makes me want to write more so thank you so muchfeel free to add...