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Hi what's up? Thanks for the friend request(:

Thanks! I think be user that made it was wanderlust. I'm Sam, and it's lovely to meet you (:

You, Gia, are a true goddess. :)
While I adored your comment and feedback very much, I was just hoping you'd say it was alright or that it sucked.
I was all kinds of unsure about it.
And it was a short update. Last week the chapter was just over 5,000 words long and this chapter was almost 3,700 words long.
But thank you so much. I truly appreciate you taking the time and being honest with me. And Liv has grown stronger but it's nothing to be worried about. She was mad at Coach for what he'd said to her about Tyler.

Hey, Gia.
Remember when I said I didn't like how I started my chapter and you read it and said you didn't see what was so wrong with it the other day?
Well, could you please be brutally honest with me about the chapter when you read it? You don't have to leave a story comment if you don't want to, but could you let me know what you really, honestly think about the chapter in a profile comment or pm? I'd really appreciate knowing what you think.
And don't worry about hurting my feelings. I'll take whatever you say (if you say it) in a constructive way.

I'm glad I could make your week after you managed to make my day. :)
Now, I'm gonna sign off cause mibba is too distracting right now and atm I'm not too sure if I'm ever gonna finish this chapter up! But, haha, prepare for some drama in my MHHWSAGI universe. ;)

No problem.

I wouldn't mind at all. :)
And I'll be sure to be extra honest with my opinions.

Ha!
That'll do. :)

Four times?
Color me flattered. :)

Ahh, Gia.
You just made my day with that lovely comment of yours.
Brain candy is a cool term, btw. :D
I hope you find the next update (as well as the rest of the story) brain candy as well. ;)
Just curious here, but how many times have you reread MHHWSAGI?

Great. :)
Well, as much fun as it has been chatting with you, Gia, I'm getting too distracted haha.
I'm gonna log off now so I can get this thing written. And I do believe that I won't scrap what I pm'ed you.
Good luck with your writing. :)

I've had problems like that. :)
Don't worry about it. You'll find a way to get everything to work.

So that's what you're having trouble with? Coming up with an idea?

That is true, however, most people, (myself included) don't leave very helpful comments. Not that I'm complaining about the comments I've gotten, I appreciate every single one even if someone leaves me "Loved it," as a comment. I can't expect something completely deep because I know what I'm writing doesn't inspire deep thinking.
I do hope you get actual feedback though.
I should have been able to guess that it was going to be a Jimmy story haha. Your username and profile layout should have been the first clues. :)

So are you planning to post the story or is it just something that you're writing for yourself?

:)
Thanks.

So are you still having trouble with your writer's block?

When I re-read just now I thought to myself that it wasn't so bad actually haha.
It's because I'm bored. I told you when I'm bored and I write I feel like what I'm writing is boring.

Idk, I feel like the chapter should start off differently than how I wrote it. I'll figure it out. :)
I may decide to keep that way, you never know.

Sent.

Okay. :)
I'm gonna pm it to you.

You have no idea how true that statement is haha.
SInce I'm pretty sure I'm gonna scrap what I have written just now, would you like to read it?