No worries! :) Not all criticism is completely nice. Yours was honest, and I respect that! I would rather honest criticism over criticism not meant to make an impact. :)
And thanks for your previous comment. :) I get really antsy whenever there are new comments/criticisms, and it made me feel good that you enjoyed it thus far. Thanks! :)
Thank for your honesty! I know that the photo isn't align, and it does bother me, but it's just a photo. As for Micah's photo, I just found a guy who resembled his description. And not all people look their age, give or take. As for the choppy sentences, I write like that from time to time, but sorry if it bothered you any. But I do appreciate your criticism. :)