The Silver Snitch / Comments

Yeahh.
I'm not sure if it'll be out anytime soon.
I'm still figuring it all out.
(:

If you have any questions, I'd be happy to help.
I am, after all, one of those authors that believe that a story is all about presentation.
(Thus why I've gotta have nice, fancy, easy reading, layouts anymore.)

Yeahh, my mom's boyfriend is Norwegian.
It's Rosemaling, which is a type of Norwegian painting.
Google it, it's pretty cool.
=D

Haha the math was my idea.
'Cause I haven't done math in years and I know it's what's really going to hold me back when I go to get my GED.

I'm sure you'll enjoy it.
Some of the concepts are the same as from LFAL, but small stuff.
It's a completely different idea
(:

So close?
I'm so excited, I'm mentally sitting on the edge of my chair.
(Mentally cause I'm lazyin' down on a couch being lazy but shhhh. ;D )

I've been pretty good.
I'm doin' my painting, started a Norwegian language class, I'm gong to completely relearn algebra, and I'm beginning to learn ASL.
=D

And how about yourself, dear?

Haha the main things I edited was tense, and pretty vocabulary.
'Cause I realized that I'd been using lazy language.

Well, I know you want to read it.
I've actually got this new Tom story idea a brewin' in my head.

Well, as I told xDorksXareXcoolx, I can't promise that things will be the same as they are in J.K. Rowling's story, because this is alternate universe from hers.
Therefore, different things happen and such.

I believe I forgot to reply to you forever ago.
Not sure.
However, how have you been?

Hello! Just saw your comments and wanted to say thank you, and have a wonderful day too :)

Awww! That means a lot! Thanks!

I'm glad you like how I made Emily in this story haha... Thanks for the comment!:D

Horror stories are an entirely different element.
It's all about the suspense.

Haha I know.
But I'm glad that that's a reason you like it.
(:

I'm considering just deleting Equal as a story and write an epilogue on Lady for a Lord.
Because I know I could write all the basics of what Equal was supposed to be.

I want to come up with another good idea.
I want to be dedicated to finishing a story like I was with LFAL.
):

Ohh bullocks.
You just haven't started living yet.

Actually, my specialty is horror stories.
Blood'n'guts.
However, I am a female and have a soft spot for romance stories.
But real romance.
Like... most Tom stories I've read are him being mean with an occasional nice moment and... I wouldn't want to be with someone that treated me like crap.
That's not real romance to me.

Sounds like a good idea to me.
I've got some ideas brewing up in my head.
I'm considering not finishing Equal and writing a new Tom story.
But I wouldn't want it to be the same as the last.

Do you have any ideas?

Anytime.
(:

You don't sound fucked in the head.
Trust me, I'm plenty loony up there myself.
But you sound like you need to live a little bit.

Tell me something, dear, when are you going to open you eyes and realize that this is your life and you hold the reins?

I do think it is an accomplishment.
(:

Understandable.
Overcoming limits is good.
Sorry, that was proper shit for advice.
But when I asked what you wanted to write about, I was asking for details.
:P

Bouncing story ideas off another writer can help develop the story.
Plus, I'd like to know what kinds of things you want to write about.

Yeahh.
Basically, you inhale and exhale over about a 10 second period, in through your nose, out through your mouth.
As you inhale, focus about thinking about all the pent up stress on your body.
As you exhale, imagine you're letting it go.
You have to keep concentrated on the breathing though.
If you let your mind wonder and forget about it you'll have to start all over

Good point.

Well, what kind of experiences do you wish you had?

Haha.
Anytime.

Gosh. I just wrote a five thousand word chapter on my latest working creation.
-.-'

What do you like writing about?
Or, what would you like to write about?

Ohh man, it's all about being able to clear your mind and relax.
Have you tried deep breathing?

You just have to keep reminding yourself that it doesn't have to be perfect and you have time to fix it.
It's all about will power, dear.

No, no, it is all about my own experiences.
However, I've never been truly addicted to anything.
I just don't have the attention span.
But overcoming an addiction can be the toughest battle.
And is a very dark and depressing topic.

It also lets me use big fancy words to describe their depressed-ness. xD

And thank you for the story comment, dear.
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
(:

Maybe you should go to bed earlier?

Indeed.
You've just got to remember that it doesn't have to be 100% perfect the first time around. (:

I am pretty wicked.
: D

I keep writing dark, drug addiction stories.
Not sure why.

Yeahh.
Plus, I edit things plenty of times before I decide they're ready.

Ohh, I meant the book. :P

Ohh, jeeze.
Do you go to sleep later?

Yesss.

I do, but only main points of the story. I have to write in between stuffs or it's gonna be a very quick, empty story.

Well, I'd be happy to read it any time.
And if you decided to post a finished version one day, I'm sure I'd read it.
After all, I know very well writing takes rounding and polishing until it's just how you want it.

Well, this story won't be out for a while.
I haven't done any editing whatsoever.
And my rough writing is pretty horrid.
It's not until I edit it do I put any fancy words in and such.
But there's 36 thousand words in the first sixteen chapters.
I don't want to post anything until I'm finished with it.

It's pretty funny in the beginning, but sadly doesn't get much better after that.

That is pretty awesome!
I would have loved to go to school at 10 when I went to school.
Lol.

It's all about practice.
You don't get good at anything until you force yourself to do it over and over again until you get it right.

I sure hope so too, lol.

I'm at a loss for what to do on Equal.
I haven't written anything in weeks.
I just blank when I think of what to write.
I hate figuring out the little things.
-.-'

It's hella different than my writing style on LFAL.
But it's an Oli Sykes of Bring Me The Horizon fan fiction.
Now, I'm not actually much a fan of BMTH, only like a few of their songs, but the story required someone who was both a rockstar and owned a clothing line.
Of course I knew of other people, but he also does drugs.
And a big part of the story is a spiraling downfall of addiction.

(The idea came to mind when I was reading this book The Singular Exploits of Wonder Mom and Party Girl which is a story about a cocaine addiction.)

Just remember, it's the last year of high school you'll ever have to deal with.
(:

I've been... okay.
Been adjusting to my new apartment and getting ready to finish getting my GED.
Other than that, I've mostly just been drawing with charcoal, painting Rosemaling, and writing.
(:

It's quite alright.
I haven't been on here much lately as it is.
Started this story and wrote like... 36 thousand words on it in the past two weeks or so.

How have you been, dear?

Ohh.
That is rather strange.
I kind of wish I was like that.
Cause at 17 I've dropped out twice and been expelled once, so, I honestly regret not doing my work.

It's this cheap loom.
It's just faster than knitting or crocheting.
I have a short attention span for things like that.

Haha, honestly, I mostly read Harry Potter and band fan fictions.
Online, at least.
I read a lot of fantasy/romance/dark/horror.
xD

I also like... stories like The Earth My Butt and Other Big Round Things by Carolyn Mackler.
Orrr... I use to love a lot of sort of... kiddish books, like, one of my favorite books of all time is The Doll People by Ann M. Martin.

Do you have any books you particularly enjoy?

Dude, when I was in grade school I thought going to school at 8:25 was horrible.
I would have given anything to go to school at 8:25 when I was in high school.
xD

That's good.
Glad to have passed it on.
(:

I'm making a scarf!
: D

What kinds of stories do you like to read on here?

Hey there! I was wondering if you can check out Trisha-ValoX69 and my story, The Misadventures of Padfoot and Prongs!

http://stories.mibba.com/read/414182/The-Misadventures-of-Padfoot-and-Prongs/

Thanks!

It's relieving, honestly.
(:

9 to 3?
Jeeze, I'm jealous.
When I went to school it was usually a 7:30 to 2.
The last school I went to was 7:35 to 1:45 though.

Illigitimus non carborundum - Never let the bastards get you down. (: