Thanks for the poem comment, and sorry I'm so late on responding
I thought about the poem comment and thought it could probably be better different, but the meaning of the poem does mesh slightly, but I do think it could be better
thank you for the lovely comment on my poem Save me.. as far as how i make it so real... I just write the way i feel.. someone once told me.. in order to captivate you must place the reader in the same location make them feel one with what your writing.. it just so happens that i can be very descriptive.. sometimes its not so easy.. but thank you so much for the comment.. ill get to ours as soon as possible! :) have a wonderful week!
I will deffiently read sum of your poems and stories :D actually I'll read all of them ^-^ and Thank you btw I'm really happy that you like my poems so much :D!
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Hello dear,
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Yours lovely
Adiva.
my poem .. empty.. i think it was (haha they all blur together at the moment) i'm actually going through everything i write about. i probably could make it up, but it would be obvious that it was fake! thanks for the comments :)