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  • cherry.berry

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    I feel like an outline would be extremely helpful once you move into the middle of the story, just so it keeps moving and you're not completely stuck.

    I'm so excited for All Tomorrow's Parties!!! I've never actually been to New York, but my co-author has, and we're both very, very excited to write this story :) Hopefully we'll have a chance to update that story again soon. Oh, there will most definitely be some delicious-ness involved: I love pizza too. Like, it's almost an obsession haha.
    March 25th, 2013 at 11:25pm
  • cherry.berry

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    I get super annoyed with myself for winging it, but I don't know if I have the patience to make an outline, and I don't know if I'll follow it anyways haha but we'll see. You're so welcome, they were really good stories! I know EXACTLY what you mean, too, it pumps me up and absolutely makes my day when I get lovely comments on my stories :) Speaking of which, thanks for commenting on All Tomorrow's Parties! I'm super excited for that one too because it's way different from the other one I'm writing. But yes, I'll update my story and you update yours and then we're both happy haha sound like a plan?
    March 22nd, 2013 at 03:58am
  • cherry.berry

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    I'm definitely going to attempt an outline; we'll see what it turns out to be, though. I've always just kind of winged it when I was writing. But maybe it's time for a change!

    And you're very welcome, I liked both stories a lot, and want to read more! :)
    March 22nd, 2013 at 02:48am
  • cherry.berry

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    Isn't it frustrating?! Oooh an outline actually sounds like a really good idea, I might try that. And yes, we're going to pull through our inability to put details into larger scenes haha and it will be great! I am now off to read one of your stories :)
    March 22nd, 2013 at 02:06am
  • cherry.berry

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    That makes it ten times better! Now I really want ice cream! And it's not really writer's block ... I could sit down and write, but I literally have no idea where I want the story to go! I have a bunch of little pieces that I want to put in somewhere but that's about it ahaha. Hopefully I'll think of something! So so so glad you enjoyed it :)
    March 21st, 2013 at 11:10pm
  • cherry.berry

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    Thank you very much for the compliment and comment, I appreciate it a lot! Doesn't ice cream make everything better? :) I'm so glad you liked the story - it's driving me insane right now, so it's nice to hear that someone likes it. So thank you!!!
    March 21st, 2013 at 08:19pm
  • vices

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    would you mind taking me down as an author for Jonah? (:
    February 19th, 2013 at 03:52am
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    I'm glad you like my story, Our Little Secret. It's currently my baby, and Rose gets spoiled the most because I can relate to her the most. I'm glad people find her realistic and relatable. I didn't want a Mary Sue because I know how much people hate that. Anyway, thanks for commenting! Also, thanks for telling me the grammar mistake. I'll fix it when I get the time! Arms
    January 13th, 2013 at 05:36am
  • theycallmeadreamer

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    No problem, I can't wait for you to update! Awww shucks Wink I'm going to try to update one of my stories tonight... But I just started school again today, so unfortunately it's back to the real world... I'm going to try to update frequently though.
    January 8th, 2013 at 11:02pm
  • Robin 'The Sidekick'

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    That's an amazing plan. I would love to travel as well. The thing is that I'm terrified of planes so I need to get used to it first. And I'd never go by myself. I'd have to bring a friend with me. haha. My friend and I are talking about going to France in a few years. But first we wanna go to Florida. Like, take a road trip maybe and just have a nice time and relax. I've never been there and I've heard some nice stuff about it. And I have a few friends that live around there. So that'd be great. :D

    I'm pretty good. Thanks. :) But I had lost my voice this morning and was like yodeling. haha. That's funny. How about you?
    January 8th, 2013 at 07:13pm
  • amorebello.

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    Aw thank you for your comment (:
    I plan to do a lot with this story and I hope you continue to read it.
    I will update as soon ASAP and thank you for the compliment I really appreciate it.
    January 8th, 2013 at 05:16pm
  • theycallmeadreamer

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    I know when I REALLY can't think of anything, I take a shower because showers are the best place to think. About to read it now! And no problem!
    January 8th, 2013 at 04:33am
  • theycallmeadreamer

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    I totally know how that feels... It took me so long to write my last chapter, just because sometimes, you just have to be in the mood to write! So I had to change positions like five times and walk around my house and do weird things just to be able to write.
    Comments are my absolute favorite thing - they make me so happy. Every time I see an alert for a comment I bubble up with happiness hahaha
    I will definitely check out your story! I have to work out right now, but I will absolutely read it tonight!
    January 8th, 2013 at 03:54am
  • theycallmeadreamer

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    I'm great! And you?
    Yes thank you very much! It always makes my day when I get comments like yours, and I am so happy you like the stories!!
    January 8th, 2013 at 03:37am
  • ThatOtherWeirdPoet

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    I'm just peachy kean. :D
    And no problem at all,
    That story is amazing.
    January 7th, 2013 at 10:15pm
  • Lady.V.

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    Hey, I'm fine, how about you? I was just being honest. Xd
    January 2nd, 2013 at 10:56pm
  • Lady.V.

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    Hey, I'm fine, how about you? I was just being honest. Xd
    January 2nd, 2013 at 10:56pm
  • Lady.V.

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    Hey, I'm fine, how about you? I was just being honest. Xd
    January 2nd, 2013 at 10:56pm
  • Lady.V.

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    Hey, I'm fine, how about you? I was just being honest. Xd
    January 2nd, 2013 at 10:55pm
  • Alsoldey

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    Oh my God thank you! I'm so tired of silent readers, haha, and I try to do the same as well :]
    January 2nd, 2013 at 08:25am