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Thanks! I had a similar comment about spacing in another story. Definitely a weakness of mine. :)

Sweet! You're very welcome. I am loving your story. :)
Man, that stinks, you missed it. I have heard of the show, but I haven't seen it.
I might watch it, later. :)

Oh no problem :) everyone deserves to hear good feedback!
I'm doing well, just trying to power through my final essay for English 102.
It's easy to write pages of romance, but writing a 12 page paper on wage gaps?
Not so fun. Hahaha.

How are you? :)

No problem, as for the name maybe in an authors notes or have the characters mention it.

Thank you! If you can, do you remember which chapter that mistake was on so I can correct it? Thanks again :D

Thank you for your comment on my story :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for commenting on Staying Up All Night.
I am really appreciative of the grammatical feedback and just the general feedback all together.
It means a lot.

Much love, Kylee (:

Thanks so much for your comment on As You Wish :)
I'm glad you enjoyed it! It means the world.

Yay! :D
That's awesome. I think that you will enjoy them, both. :)
Yes, Aladdin is amazing!!! :DDD

Thanks for the comment on Right By Your Side! Actually the teacher was based off my old Photography teacher. lol...nad someof his lines were actual things my teacher said, and then the things Lennox said back were my response...haha...he was so cool...
Whenever i was finished with my work he would bypass the the security wall and log me onto any site I wanted, and he would only do it for me, he would even let me watch movies with my best friend who was the teachers assistant...

No problem! I really liked your story :) Aw well that's good! I'm really bad at keeping up with stories but I'm determined to take this one to end. I think it helps that I love all the characters - except of Laura of course!

Hahha dont worry! I have it all planned out! He doesn't feature at all in the next chapter but he's definitely got a huge role to play overall :). Oh and I saw your comment on the story. I'll need to make it clearer but it was Liam when he was biting her neck when she was drunk.

Oops meant to say that Olivia's brother doesn't like him

I loved your story! I haven't seen anything like it on Mibba before :) You should really try and continue it! Sometimes I find writing a plot-line for my stories helps as then I know key events that will happen, you could try that?

I think I'm falling a little bit in love with Sean too! Unfortunately Olivia's brother doesn't ahaha!

Just uploaded another Sean filled chapter! It's basically about the rest of the party!

There was one another clue as well, I think it's a lot harder to spot but it should come clear in the next chapter.

Going to read your story now! I'll give you a huge big comment seeing you've been so helpful with mine!

Oh and you're right, the boxes are definitely a big clue :)

I'd love to be! :)

Wow thanks for another comment on my story! It's 2am here now so think I should probably get to bed :(

Haha! Oh well if you ever upload it, I can read that too if you want? :) I've had a look at your 'Never Let Me Go Story' (just the summary and comments) and I'm already looking forwards to reading that so would love anything else of yours too :)

Aw thank you so much!

Shall read it tomorrow! :) I would read it tonight (It's 8pm where I live) but I'm on a bit of a role with writing and know I should take advantage of it

I've just uploaded the fifth chapter and considering you like Jack, you might like this one! Although have to say, it's starting to depress me how miserable Olivia is!

What story are you struggling with? I could read it if you want although it would have to be tomorrow? :) Sometimes just a little interest or some constructive criticism can really help!

Well I'm glad you liked him! I'm trying to convey him as a fun, quite charming guy but also as possible trouble - he's definitely no Jack!

Thank you so much for your comment on my story! It's lovely to get feedback and what you said was so nice! :)

I'm currently writing the next chapter so that should be up at some point tonight hopefully!

Can I ask your opinion on Sean and the whole situation? I know beforehand readers were very much sad that Jack and Olivia split up and I was wondering whether the arrival of Sean may have changed anything? This is not me hinting that anything might become of Sean and Olivia - I don't want to give any clues to the plans I have - but I was just wondering :)