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  • Lady.V.

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    Yes. They criticize your layout, the story's title, the titles of the chapters, how well the characters are developed, if the summary was interesting enough to make them check the story itself, if you have balanced dialogue and descriptions, if your descriptions are detailed and flowy, grammar and spelling, if the basic idea of your story is too common. I think that's all.
    March 19th, 2013 at 10:54pm
  • Lady.V.

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    The first com I received made me cry
    March 19th, 2013 at 09:15pm
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    The first com I received made me cry
    March 19th, 2013 at 09:15pm
  • Lady.V.

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    U com on someones story using the comment swap feature and they have to comment back. But I'll warn you the critic is pretty harsh.
    March 19th, 2013 at 08:55pm
  • Lady.V.

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    U com on someones story using the comment swap feature and they have to comment back. But I'll warn you the critic is pretty harsh.
    March 19th, 2013 at 08:55pm
  • Lady.V.

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    From comment swap and fans.
    March 19th, 2013 at 08:45pm
  • Lady.V.

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    From comment swap and fans.
    March 19th, 2013 at 08:45pm
  • Lady.V.

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    Ask me.
    March 19th, 2013 at 08:19pm
  • Lady.V.

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    Ask me.
    March 19th, 2013 at 08:19pm
  • Lady.V.

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    Also, I added characters to our story. You have to add your boys of the story. :)
    March 12th, 2013 at 09:28am
  • Lady.V.

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    The next chapter is posted. I posted on the 7th of March. Just letting you know. :)
    March 10th, 2013 at 02:09pm
  • A T T A C K !

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    Wellllllll, this weekend is a long weekend for me, since it's going to be THREE DAYS LONG *rolls on ground in excitement* I'm really excited because I'm probably going to go shopping or something, I don't know, long weekends always make me feel like spending money on random things lol XD
    But yeah, the long weekend coming up and that's basically the only interesting thing happening in my life right now haha My life is uneventful, to say the least! :3

    Anything interesting going on with you? :]
    March 7th, 2013 at 08:10am
  • Lady.V.

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    I have already written the next chap of our story. It will be up in about 5 hours.
    March 7th, 2013 at 12:59am
  • Lady.V.

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    I have already written the next chap of our story. It will be up in about 5 hours.
    March 7th, 2013 at 12:59am
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    Oh, well that's good to hear! I will have to check out this new story then :3

    And I know, my school is stupid >.< But whatever- year 12 is almost here anyway, and besides, once school is over I can wear whatever the fuck I want to and no one can tell me otherwise haha
    March 6th, 2013 at 08:07am
  • Flying Flawed

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    No problemo dear! Mr. Green
    March 6th, 2013 at 02:58am
  • Lady.V.

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    Okay-dokey :D
    March 6th, 2013 at 02:12am
  • Lady.V.

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    Okay-dokey :D
    March 6th, 2013 at 02:12am
  • Lady.V.

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    You haven't posted the first chap of our story yet. :( When will you get it done?
    March 6th, 2013 at 01:26am
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    You haven't posted the first chap of our story yet. :( When will you get it done?
    March 6th, 2013 at 01:26am
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