You're welcome. [: I guess I didn't mean that he is creepy- just that he brought her there to a creepy place with people beating the bejesus out of others, if you get what I mean.
We survived not turning it on until we went to sleep last night. Then we turned it on because the window unit is in the bedroom. Closed it off then turned it off when we got up this morning.
Same! The end of the year can get pretty crazy, with finals and whatnot. I can also empathize with the finding a job part...I've been applying for months now D: I getcha though. There really is no "just right" when it comes to story-writing. Who says it HAS to be all about him in that next segment? You can always add more "fluff" as I call it and just add him in when you feel inspired and/or timing is appropriate. :b Idk what else to tell ya. Well I'm sure whatever you have'll be good-the readers are already hooked onto your story, and occasional writers' block is to be expected.
Oh that's alright. I'm not one of those crazy impatient readers that's like "YOU MUST UPDATE EVERY DAY" O_O Especially with the new site and everything, I think half the people on here are too lazy to even reply to comments, let alone add new story chapters and whatnot. But I get email updates so I'll know
I like them too, but I don't often leave comments at all - mostly because i'm lazy. But i prefer to leave at least a semi review detailing what I like and don't like- it's the sort of thing I would like to receive, so it's only fitting that it's the sort of comment that I give.
Oooh, I look forward to the re-write, and I also look forward to future chapters :) (Mal is such an interesting character. The Bugatti sold him for me :3 haha shallow Lily!)
And I'm practically done with school now, so hopefully I will be able to give you more and more essay-comments :D