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  • rodeoclowns

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    I'm baaaaack!
    Check out my new story? :)
    http://stories.mibba.com/read/437472/Hold-Me-Close/
    December 13th, 2011 at 02:06am
  • cmister1214

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    Say I'm a bird... No...say I'm a bird... You're a bird... Well if Im a bird youre a bird too... Say youre a bird... Im a bird....
    September 15th, 2010 at 07:00am
  • cmister1214

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    Im sorry emily for everything if i could go back and change one thing in my life it would be that night the day i lied to you and all the stuff happened i should have told you up front and be honest about it im sorry it took me so long to learn. If there is anything in the world i could do to take it back i would you know that im also sorry for being a jerk about it i just dont know how to say it in a nice way i want to be friends with you but i dont want highschool bullspit drama you know how it is its annoying but i would love to be friends with you still we were best friends like you said for almost 2 years thats about as close as it gets
    August 3rd, 2010 at 06:36am
  • cmister1214

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    Wow Emily... You look beautiful please read what a put on that journal I wrote don't ignore it please
    August 2nd, 2010 at 09:34am
  • solarflarestares

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    Thank you.
    :) :) :)
    July 31st, 2010 at 04:21am
  • therumour

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    The contest you entered, [url=http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/post/7641760/#7641760]Every Heart That Was Broken[/url], has had its deadline pushed back. The new deadline is Friday, July 9th, and we still look forward to seeing your entry! If you need to drop out for any reason whatsoever, feel free to let us know in any way you can. Thank you for joining. <3
    July 1st, 2010 at 07:41am
  • kili the dwarf

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    Thank you very much for commenting on my story!
    =) I'm glad you're enjoying it, please keep reading and commenting.
    May 24th, 2010 at 03:07am
  • Flightless Bird

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    Your welcome, and you have some pretty good stories.
    November 28th, 2009 at 12:09am
  • Flightless Bird

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    I think that if the banner ahs no faces then it is fine. Being creative like that is something that draws people in cause it is figuritive. And it just depends on what kind of title it is. If one word is what describes the story then use that. You can always go so many ways with a title. Just be sure that it doesnt give away the whole story plot, but a small insight to it.
    November 27th, 2009 at 11:28pm
  • Audrey T

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    No problem. I love that story. So interesting and well written .:D
    September 28th, 2009 at 03:54am
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    Yeah. I guess, kind of. Just as long as the story itself is sad, I guess it doesn't matter if the ending is sad. I don't know how to explain. I mean, if something happens early on, and maybe at the end the main character comes to terms with what has happend, the end doesn't neccessarily have to be sad.
    September 13th, 2009 at 01:15am
  • alivetonight

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    Why did your story randomly get deleted?
    maybe it was against the story code thing or something?
    August 8th, 2009 at 09:31pm
  • edwardpotter0

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    It's really ironic about your friends name and my screen name! : ) See ya!
    August 8th, 2009 at 02:47am
  • alivetonight

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    Oh, thanks for the review! :D
    course you did have to ask, if you didn't you wouldn't have heard the awesome example LOL
    I get discouraged too, but remember, most stories don't get looked at because they aren't updated that often. I know that's one of the reason's I don't look at stories when I search for them, because there's only a few chapters.
    I know, I don't get that either :/
    beauty is in the eye of the beholder I guess
    unless there's a bunch of bad stories that you don't like but just can't stop reading :|
    those bug the hsit out of me ahaha
    I'm planning on finishing every story I haven't finished on my thing right now, which is three, and the equinox one is definitely getting finished because I'm excited about it!
    I usually type out the plot and resolution for the whole stroy and briefly outline most of the chapters, then I lose interest and never write and ending. It sucks.
    But, if I force myself to write, I'll keep rewriting it until I think it's okay and finish the story haha.
    that's my method, it might help!
    August 7th, 2009 at 10:33pm
  • Hayley Kinz

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    awe thanks so much! i wasn't sure if it was good or not
    August 7th, 2009 at 09:39pm
  • alivetonight

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    oh, thanks for checking out the story I shamelessly advertise :D
    I'm so dang proud ;D

    Oh, I meant you DIDN'T put too much information.
    You know, the stories that start like this:
    I'm Kat Laurent, and I'm 16 and I go to blah blah high school. Nobody likes me because I'm really good at dancing in the hallways. I like it though, along with the colour blue, writing, painting, and playng with my dog.
    and such? XD
    IT was goooood :) are you writing for it still?
    August 7th, 2009 at 07:09pm
  • alivetonight

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    done done and done ;D
    haha I love the feeling when I publish something new on here
    it's grrrrreat!

    that wasn't that tiger from frosted flakes at all.
    I don't mind it, because the book also said bella was pretty, so I guess we're pretty in a plain way XD
    I'm the same with writing, though. Grammar doesn't happen until after it's finished LOL
    August 7th, 2009 at 07:54am
  • Hayley Kinz

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    i LOVE YOUR STORY!
    i was hoping you would check out my new story Waiting for Love, you might not like it, 'typical teen story' so if you don't want to read that one maybe check out piano man?
    August 7th, 2009 at 04:27am
  • heartxkriz

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    Lol, thanks, I made it myself. :) Took me a damn long time, but it was worth it!
    August 6th, 2009 at 06:53pm
  • Rhiley

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    well i have this i have a new journal and it will mean the world to me if you commented you think u can take a look at it and tell me your opion please again it would mean alot =)
    August 6th, 2009 at 06:57am