Thank you so much! I literally just got caught up with I'll Be Right Beside You and Carry On and I loved them!! Jordan is so adorable and Dean is, like, too hot for t.v.... Or at least that's what I think haha.
Exactly! If he was good at everything, it'd just be a little ridiculous :) He gets to be hockey Jesus, so he's not allowed to be good at decorating a house lolz!
I'm not sure why men are inherently bad at picking out decor, but I feel like that's one thing that Sid wouldn't excel at lolz! Thanks so much for your comments, they mean a lot :)
Dude! Kevin's mom is a beast. I want to be that awesome when I am her age. I have mixed feelings about Benny though. I'm not sure if I like him or not. I do like that he has an accent that makes Jensen's accent come out. I love the southern accent. Jonathan Quick's is awesome too lol.
Wow, thank you for your comment! I'm really glad you liked the role reversal. It had a lot of fun writing Harry's breakdown, probably more than I should have. And thank you for saying I did well at bringing out their emotions. Usually I'm shit at it.
I never intended Kris to have feelings for her, so I'd be interested to know what made you think he did lolz! But thank you so much for the comment! It was so sweet, and I'm so glad that it pulled that kind of emotion outta you!
Well thanks! I won't lie, I wrote that chapter last night at, like, 10 o'clock when I should have been studying for my algebra I exam and I was pretty much running on empty. I had zero ideas for the chapter, so I just started writing. I'm so glad you liked it!
I can understand that, I just see scenes with everyone involved easier so that's why I like the third person better. Its definitely a matter of taste. Obviously I'm not opposed to first person, in fact I think it takes quite a bit of talent since I find it so difficult. I feel like I wouldn't develop the other characters as well if I remained in first person, so I admire people who can pull it off. And just so you know the kids in my dorm hall just laughed at me cause they asked what I was doing and being the blunt person that I am I just told them flat out what I was doing and now they think I have commitment issues. Sigh, my kids (I am an RA) are weird.
Third person is difficult? Really? I can't stand writing in first person. It's easier to incorporate both characters in third person. In first, you are confined to that one person's thoughts and feelings for the chapter at least if not the whole piece of work. And to be quite frank, I have commitment issues. I cannot focus on one person too long lol. You did fine for the first chapter, I liked it a lot, so I have faith that you will be just fine. Good luck!
I'm so glad you liked the ending, it got some mixed reviews. But on another note, you won't have to say good-bye to Sidney and Lenore completely just yet. (Drum roll please!)
I've made the decision to write a Jordan/Chantal fic in the near future. Check back on the Live in Reality summary page in a few hours and I will leave a link to the summary page of their story there.
that's pretty sweet! which university are you going to in Alberta?
kin is an interesting subject but it does take a lot of work just to understand how everything functions and whatnot
well for your sister, tell her that there are different areas that she could go into in she wants to do kin. For example, she could do sport management which is something im actually considering
Thanks for your comment! I'm glad Jordan came off that way- I was hoping for it. I'm REALLY debating whether or not to write a little story for Chantal and Jordan. I think I'll probably cave and write it in a while.
you're very lucky! but i can see your point, school is so expensive which is ridiculous honestly
im in university right now but i think i should have taken the college route, i can get a job so much more quickly and it's way more hands on you know what i mean?