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FluffeeWrites / Comments
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Please, tell me you will update ALONE. I am begging you here.December 1st, 2014 at 08:23pm
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It seems like I have to chant the spell.
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATEJune 6th, 2014 at 09:09am -
I hope you'll update Alone soon.February 3rd, 2014 at 03:31pm
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I'm not giving up on this story.
If you check my custom profile you'll see your story is on my list of favorites.November 23rd, 2013 at 09:26am -
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The fact that you messaged me saying you were waiting for the update made my heart swell xD I didn't think people were reading it anymoreNovember 23rd, 2013 at 05:13am -
Hey, when are you gonna update Alone? I'm waiting you know.November 21st, 2013 at 12:18pm
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Hello hun. If you have free time and you want, please read this questionaire about stories and answer there. Thank you very much for your time sweetheart.
AND, I'M STILL WAITING FOR ANOTHER UPDATE ON ALONE.October 7th, 2013 at 11:40pm -
Here's your interview hun, x.
On another note, I'm waiting for the next update of Alone.September 22nd, 2013 at 07:55pm -
Yay, I can't wait to read it. :)February 10th, 2013 at 09:27am
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Yay, I can't wait to read it. :)February 10th, 2013 at 09:27am
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Your welcome. Xd If you ever want ideas again or help with writer's block, tell me. I'll help. XdDecember 30th, 2012 at 01:02pm
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Your welcome. Xd If you ever want ideas again or help with writer's block, tell me. I'll help. XdDecember 30th, 2012 at 01:02pm
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Well, I'll tell you what I would have written for it to match the prequel and be realistic. You could give it a tragic end as I said before. Make Dylan leave her, not because he learned she was homeless but because she didn't trust him, so they break up and slowly go back to friends. And to make it look a bit different from the prequel, you could make Mathai have new friends while being friends with her ex called Dylan. Then one of the new friends asks Mathai out and for some reason she accepts without really wanting to (the reason can be: blackmail because one day he heard Mathai and Dylan talking about her being homeless and Mathai didn't want to lose her friends and be alone again) You could make the new guy rape her (like at the prequel with Riley) and after wasn't pure anymore she couldn't handle and commited suicide. That was what I would have wrote. Like :DDecember 30th, 2012 at 06:18am
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Well, I'll tell you what I would have written for it to match the prequel and be realistic. You could give it a tragic end as I said before. Make Dylan leave her, not because he learned she was homeless but because she didn't trust him, so they break up and slowly go back to friends. And to make it look a bit different from the prequel, you could make Mathai have new friends while being friends with her ex called Dylan. Then one of the new friends asks Mathai out and for some reason she accepts without really wanting to (the reason can be: blackmail because one day he heard Mathai and Dylan talking about her being homeless and Mathai didn't want to lose her friends and be alone again) You could make the new guy rape her (like at the prequel with Riley) and after wasn't pure anymore she couldn't handle and commited suicide. That was what I would have wrote. Like :DDecember 30th, 2012 at 06:18am
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It's alright :D can't wait for the next update btwJuly 11th, 2012 at 08:02am
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Ur welcome :D I love Dark Prince but I get confused sometimes as to who's pov its in so I thinking that I'll just reread it :PJuly 9th, 2012 at 12:52pm
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Glad i could help :)June 7th, 2012 at 06:44am
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Thaaanks Thessa you meanie poo <3June 7th, 2012 at 04:10am
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I would like something bad to happen. Im weird and i dont know why i like it when bad things happen in stories :PJune 4th, 2012 at 05:21am
I finished reading, there was one chapter more that I hadn't read. I am not sure what you can do to end this, but with just one chapter it won't work out. You need at least three chapters in my opinion, one to show how the relationship between the two of them is going, then trusting her friends with the fact that she's homeless and them taking care of her ~ like leting her stay at their house and helping her find a job. Having Kile live with her in a house they will be renitng will be a good epilogue I think.