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@ Dodger
i'm doing ok. college is coming to a close for the year and working on job applications. a few more papers to write ugh! but it's not a thesis so i'm not gonna moan too much to you :P

I sorta got inspired to write a little bit, but i don't know how long it will last/ if i will act on it. we'll see. At least it's for one of the stories on here already (It Brought Me to You).

Maybe we shall both return to the writing world. we shall see O_O

It is an original, I think once I finish up all the fan fictions I have going on at the moment, it might be the end of fan fiction writing for me. But never say never :P
Thanks for calling me out on my mistake in Hopeful Liars! I hadn't even noticed, in fact, I had completely forgotten I had written that chapter! I will start writing all my stories again once I hand my thesis in next week :) I promise I haven't forgotten all my neglected babies. I'll give them a polish and make them shine again.
Otherwise, I'm good...a little bit stressed but hopefully I'll get through it ok and be free for the summer! How are you doing?

Hey friend ;)
started a new story!http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/520673/Someone-Elses-Angel/
And will be back in action soon once I finish up my college thesis :D

Thank you so much for your comment on my story Helena's Violin. I am really glad you liked it!

Thank you so very much for sticking with Fly Away With Me and commenting! :D It's so good to be back. I promise to update soon. Never fear! I have direction now :D

I am good.I'm glad to be back on Mibba...I just got so busy with everything,college,work,boyfriend,friends and whenever I was online,it always ended up being facebook and not Mibba.I never had time to write and then I found it really hard to keep all my creative writing going as I study journalism, and we are being taught how to write fact, not fiction. So everything just turned bottom up. But I missed everything and everyone. I started a new story called Finding my Broken Heart and then all my others, I still have going. Updating slowly but surely!haha...x

Hi,just to say I'm back writing again and I hope you're still interested if you're using Mibba.I miss your crazy, enthusiastic comments!haha, love love x

Thanks for my comment on Treason! I'm gonna have to go back and re-edit so it makes more sense. :D

Hey,thanks so much for still following Wings and now Hopeful Liars :) Just wanted to make sure my chapters are showing up 'cause you said there hadn't been any updates since June but I put a second chapter up a few days ago,were you able to read that? xx

Just wanted to let you know that there's an update :)

Arhhh, the last comment was September 1st? Ouch. I've been gone a while since then too!! Uni life has been awesome, but very hectic! Done for the year now. Things have been brilliant, nonstop, but brilliant. Been to see all sorts of theatre, been in a professional production myself, I now have an awesome boyfriend and an epic group of friends. Have a house with three other awesome girlies for next year, and things are pretty awesome. Been ages since I wrote anything though, my fingers are itching to get back to the keypad properly.

How're you? :) xxx

I am updating Death By Candle. If you're still interested. xP

hey! Haven't spoken to you in a while...how are you? =]

I'm back to school too :( It went by way too fast!!!

But my vacation was good :D And yours?

I've been good! Anf I'm finally on vacation *.*

And you hun?

Wow!!! That's impressive! And kinda creepy xD

Okie dokie. I'm assuming it's the following paragraph?

[i]Tt connects to...[/i] - It?
[i]...canal. sounds gross right?[/i] - capital 's'.
[i]...school. they're kind...[/i] - capital 't'.
[i]from gapping to sympathetic[/i] - gaping?

Really weird, I have no idea where you came up with this from?! But yet oddly interesting to read and I'd love to see how you developed it. The notion of an asexual human is pretty original.

Be careful with your balance of formal/ informal here. Obviously it's pretty informal on the whole, but be careful you don't overdo the informal, because then it becomes a little too ironic, and just sounds a bit hammed up. For example, the part: [i]Well, try having it on your body. Then you can talk.[/i] sounds kind of vicious to the reader, and you don't want to scare them off. Plus it's a little odd to suddenly impose a second person. Direct address is really useful at times, but done badly it can really undermine a reader.

To start off with 'I wasn't born with a penis...' is definitely a killer first sentence! It really sets the tone of the rest of the piece, and it's such a bare and striking sentence, it definitely gets the reader engaged immediately. Keep that.

What's this for, a possible story?

Both went really well thanks. One of them turned into making a film instead though, so there's still some footage to film in September.

Urgh, I know how annoying that is. Our internet provider has put a cap on our evening usage (after 6:00pm) so it's really slow now. Which means that all my internet pages tend to crash after a while of struggling to get to the next page.

Indeed! Glad you dropped by! ;)

Really? Awesomeness. Drop me a message when you next put a chapter up. I think I'm subscribed, but I'm not great at checking my emails.

I've been really busy! Which is probably a good thing. I've been doing two plays, had several festivals with the Brazilian dance/ drum group from school, and I've been working mornings plus babysitting in the evenings so I've been hard pressed to find a moment spare to just sit down!

How about yourself? What have you been doing?

Okay, I'll summarise lol. It's to do with you leave me breathless.
Me: The girls aren't the type to go through the system.
You: You can't tell what the attitudes of orphans are going to be!
Me: No, you can't tell!

and that's pretty much it LOL.
And no problem =]
xo