Zorua / Comments

Thanks a ton for taking the time to read through Blood Type, means a lot. :) I started writing this story years ago, so honestly when I look back through it, I see PLENTY of mistakes, lol, but with another story on the side makes it kind of difficult to work on both. I've improved greatly with my writing..but there's so much chapters to go through to edit, lol, I know (lazy much) plus I don't want to confuse the readers by changing up the latest chapters. :/ But the sequel will totally make up for it. :)

Lol, thank you. :)) I know! It's overrated and tiresome. -_- And no worries, I will, I'm working on the next one as we speak! :D

Thanks for the comment on my story "It will all end in tears". It is truely helpful, and I'm going to try and do what you've suggested. I'm not the strongest writer but I try my hardest and for the whole I'm very conscious about spelling and grammar so hopefully that makes up for the weaker parts in my story. Thanks once again. Gezsgrim x

Thank you for your comment. But, you see, you're not supposed to feel emotion for the mom. The whole idea for the chapter was to get you right into the story where it truly starts. Pandora's mom was not a main character in any way, and I couldn't have gone before that point. If you keep with the story, you will soon see why I started the way I did.

Thank you for the feedback. I really appreciate it.
This story was originally for NaNoWriMo so the random details were put in for word count.
Also thanks for pointing out the errors. I guess I missed them when I was re-reading it. Anyway once again, thanks for the comment and help.

You're welcome!

Oh I was in the same boat awhile ago :P

A beta is an editor for someone. They look at your draft or "beta" for you and help you with grammar, characterization, flow and other helpful tips and pointers for your stories or poetry.

Thank you for the comment on my story, even if it isn't your typical genre.I`ve been trying to fix those grammar errors but it`s hard without a beta :P
Anyways, thanks for the help and comment!

Haha I totally get that a lot! I'll be talking to my fiance and be all like "I can hardly fathom what you're trying to tell me" Or some crap like that. It's stupid. He just looks at me like I'm an alien.

Amen to that! hahah. I'm such a blonde at heart that it isn't even funny. xD

Thanks for the comment! Haha I realized I did a lot of that. I just got a new program that is helping with my grammar. It's sad that I'm terrible at it, but oh well. :)

thanks for the feedback; I'll try and apply some of it in my future chapters :)

Hey no problem, your a very skilled writer :) dont ever stop. Ill read your stuff from time to time

Thank you for the story comment, darling.

Though, I do like improving so could you kindly tell me where my error is?
I tend to glance over them. I don't see them until someone points them out.

thank you for the story comment (:

thanks for the comment on A Broken Home, it means allot to hear that it's coming along well. I just updated it if you want to read it.

welcome to mibba