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  • SilverSea

    SilverSea (100)

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    I liked your story "Of shapeshifters and Kitchens" a lot! There's however one tiny double-edged blade in it; in the first part you say the protagonist hadn't been able to make any money all day, in the last part he was fed 'all leftovers' from breakfast. Shouldn't that have been dinner? Anyway, it threw me a little off guard!

    If I'm mistaken, than listen to this! I liked your story, HerpADerp! :D
    May 6th, 2012 at 11:19am