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  • poison and blood

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    Just dropping by to tell you that I love you and hope everything is going well for you! xx
    January 6th, 2015 at 05:46am
  • Dom.

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    Before I get to your story, I would just like to say that I absolutely love your comment on 635798! Thank you so much for the kind words! If you were next to me I would hug you but you're not so these will have to do: Arms Arms Arms Arms
    August 13th, 2014 at 07:46am
  • XSoulXLoverX

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    Hey! :))

    I am hosting a Poetry contest! I'd love it if you joined :)
    March 29th, 2014 at 10:50pm
  • Lady.V.

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    Hello c:
    December 29th, 2013 at 09:52am
  • GGGG.

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    Gracias for the story comment<3
    December 16th, 2013 at 06:50pm
  • XSoulXLoverX

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    Still co-judging? I sent someone their score, but if you still are interested, then please score the entry "A Girl Who" and send me the score you give it, based on what I sent you, send me your final score, and I will average them out! You just need to tell me if you still are by Wednesday at the latest.
    December 9th, 2013 at 06:16pm
  • XSoulXLoverX

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    Are you still interested in co-judging the contest
    November 11th, 2013 at 07:28am
  • poison and blood

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    I almost took that seriously at first.
    Why. Ahaa
    Thank you, you motivate the hell outta me. ;D
    May 15th, 2013 at 01:29am
  • poison and blood

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    Thank you so much! It means a lot that you would say that! This story is kinda my baby. I've gotten several requests for a sequel...Should I go for it? It would probably be full length... c;
    May 15th, 2013 at 12:08am
  • lady of the sunshine

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    May 13th, 2013 at 03:49am
  • fall0ut

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    well i can't really answer that without giving away a bunch of spoilers, but i can tell you that what will happen will (hopefully) be free of cliches in your eyes. so if that's your fear, i'll try to avoid it as much as possible. i can't tell you what will happen, but i can tell you it won't be your basic storyline. hope that makes you feel better about it.
    January 28th, 2013 at 04:54am
  • Whatsername?

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    Thanks for the comment, it made me grin like a crazylady. c: I've been feeling less and less of the dreaded writer's block over the last couple days and hopefully will have time to get more chapters out within the next couple weeks since I'm on break and all that jazz. I seriously appreciate the feedback though, stuff like that is what keeps me writing. :D And I'm glad you don't think my descriptions as of late weren't lacking, I was worried they weren't as 'impressive' as they were before. I guess it is about trying to find a nice balance of dialogue and description.
    December 21st, 2012 at 02:00pm
  • nearly witches.

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    No problem, I really do enjoy the storyline (and I have the biggest crush on Billie Joe Armstrong, so that helps a bit, haha) and I try to always leave really good comments on stuff. I've been the same lately, so don't worry. I look forward to the next chapter then! :)
    November 11th, 2012 at 10:42am
  • GoodGirl;

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    Thank you for the lovely comment on Moment of Weakness! I'm glad you didn't sugarcoat it, because that's exactly what I need!! Thank you
    November 10th, 2012 at 11:16pm
  • XSoulXLoverX

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    Winners for the poetry section for my pre-writes contest have been posted. If you have won, I want to say conrgrats. If you did not place, I'm very sorry, it isn't that your poem wasn't good, but there could only be 3 winners. So go check it out and if you have one, pm or comment to claim your prizes! Best of luck!
    November 4th, 2012 at 07:07pm
  • hello love.

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    hi, thanks for your comment on A Better Man!
    I agree with you on the descriptive thing, but sometimes I want to leave it open to ambiguity, so readers don't have to follow my ideas on the characters, but on settings I'll definitely give it a go. On making the French stand out, I deliberately left it as the other text so it wouldn't - I wanted little phrases and words to flow naturally into Aurore's speech and not stand out on the page (and thus be distracting or need to be read a few times to get over the natural stress that italics seem to suggest) but I did think about putting them in italics for a long time before even posting. It seemed more natural and the French less noticeable if they were as the rest of the rest of the text, and normalising her use of French language, especially in emotional situations, was what I was going for.
    Thanks again! :D
    October 23rd, 2012 at 11:45am
  • River Young;

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    Thank you. I will keep that in mind for the future. :)
    October 22nd, 2012 at 04:49am
  • River Young;

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    I'm sorry you didn't get offered a story with something you knew more about. lol I apologize for that.
    Thank you very much for the comment! <3
    October 22nd, 2012 at 04:28am
  • DreamingCorpse

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    Yes, yes I have.
    They are an amazing band! n.n
    October 18th, 2012 at 05:37am
  • XSoulXLoverX

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    I'm not sure you realize how happy I am that this comment made you this happy!! Honestly, I know I shouldn't be saying this, but you poem is going to be nearly imposisble to beat. Just saying, I'll make sure to post the winners for the poetry section really soon! I think you are so talented! And Gah! I adore you!
    October 13th, 2012 at 03:29am