Actually, I do have a general idea of what's going to happen. It's just when writing that chapter it didn't seem very realistic for it to go that way, so the twist fixed that, and it makes what happens later so much better.
Thank you so much for the story comment, I'm glad you liked it. To answer your question, the name Ana is often used to talk about anorexia because "Ana" sounds like the beginning of "anorexia", see? Also, it also sort of makes the disorder seem more real. Often, anorexics think of Ana as a friend who helps them lose weight. For me (and for Cassie, in the story) Ana is like a voice in my head. If that clarifies? Anyhoo, thank you again for commenting, and I will continue to write. :)
Hey thank you so much for the wonderful comment on 'Forgive Me' I will go over and see what i can fix, the second chapter should be up soon just have to revise over it a little more then I will post it :D cheers Esther
You joined my contest Everyone Has Some Sort of Fear and I just wanted to let you know that you still have time to submit your story because I extended the date until the 30th because I only had one entry.
Thank you for the story comment. Even though you weren't a fan of the story, it means a lot that you gave me some constructive criticism. It's always welcome. But I would like to point out that the only reason I even considered the whole "friends with benefits" thing is to make fun of stereotypes about people like us. It wasn't meant to offend anyone. Thanks again. -A
Yes, it's based on a true story, just research Third Serville War or Spartacus War. He was a gladiator who started a war against the roman republic because he believed slavery was not humane and all men deserve freedom equally. I mention the show because I get inspiration from it to write some scenes that would be hard to write if I didn't have some sort of visual inspiration. Honestly, the only thing that matches the show exactly is Gannicus's physical description because I believe the actor who plays him on the show looks perfect for this part. And note that Gannicus was a real man, a gladiator who fought for the house of Batiatus and later helped build the slave rebellion. This is not fanfiction. It's my interpretation of a real war which happened in 73 BC (and feel free to google it). Some elements, like some characters, were created by me, and a couple of scenes were written with inspiration froe show and the film Gladiator, mostly the fighting scenes. These scenes are not a copy of the show, they're just inspired by it. Just wanted to clear that up. And thanks for the comment