Elysia / Comments

  • hahaha. well see like, two or three years ago, i wrote "Your Guardian Angel" in a notebook. so when i started writing it on my computer, i went back to read the notebook and like get more ideas and try to follow the storyline and i looked at it and was like ... "wtf. this is so fifth grade." i felt ridiculous.
    June 22nd, 2012 at 08:33am
  • yeah. well, now that i'm going back and reading the story.. i can't believe i would post something thaaaat crappy. lmao. i think as soon as i finish at least two of the four i'm working on, i may re-write it completely. it's just so sloppy and ugh. ew.
    June 22nd, 2012 at 07:07am
  • i hate that, too, because you have SUCH good intentions with changing it but then it just effs EVERYTHING else up and you're like "man.. shoot. that would've been good. i think." and yeah, sometimes it's just better to leave well enough alone. i had that happen with a couple of my stories. one of them i did change... shootout, i had it set for another year, and then i realized it was the wrong year, so i had to go back and change all sorts of things, and rewrite a bunch of chapters and put in whole new ones in order for it to make sense, so yeah, it's difficult.
    June 22nd, 2012 at 06:29am
  • it's a great story and very well written! you'd have to be lazy not to comment :P plus, i know how much i appreciate feedback on my stories, so i try to give it to others as well, so you're very welcome (:

    i think you would get frustrated, honestly, because you'd try to write more but it wouldn't turn out the way you want it to, and you'd have this idea in your head and it would be just wrong and then you'd be pissed off cos the story's changed and everything, and i think it would be not necessarily a big mistake.. but it think it would be a big pain to have to go back and do all of that.
    June 22nd, 2012 at 05:50am