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@ The Authoress
Who said what?

I'm so glad you did, and your other story inspired me to write the stupidest story of life. However, I noted out the cutest story of life that I'm calling My Ella Enchanted, it's not cute yet, but it will be when I start writing it. Anyways, the stupidest story of life is the one you want to grace your email...it's still in process. Here's a hint; I have four and a half years, minus a semester to write for. It might take some time.

@ discoveringclouds
its not done :P who said that?? it's not even near done but i had to show it to you somehow XD

@ The Authoress
THIS is what you were hiding! Wow. I'm glad you got it finished before you told me anything. A beautiful surprise to find your story here. Ahhh I made you happy, I'm glad :) Here Dado sounds so beautiful...I just want to "meet" her again.

THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS!! :D Made my day! <3 I meant to edit that lol because initially I made it in Pakistan but then it wasn't half as interesting then, barely made much sense so i changed a lot ebfore putting it here.. i'll fix the rickshaw.. and this was the story i was hiding from you XD wanted your reaction when it was done but now its out :D YAY!

@ losing control.
Your welcome. I guess it was more sentence flow that had me getting confused. I hope you have fun playing around with the sentence length. :)

Uh, thanks for the comment on Close to Her Heart

I'm a bit confused though, where is the editing mistake? And thanks for pointing out the sentence length thing, I tend to have a problem with that, aha.

Ah! I'm glad to have met you as well! You're just awesome to talk to! I'm glad you're excited about the Knights, you should be. They're very very fun!

Aw... Thank you!! You are far too kind, like really. I'm just glad you enjoyed it! Commenting is fun. I've kind of been on a commenting spree since last night. I was actually commenting on stuff during my wait at the dentist office this morning.

@ Invader Spiffy
Hopefully it makes more sense. Let me know any suggestions you have. Ill gladly have head office look through them. Aka my brain.

@ LettersToNormandy
I've read your comment several times since you wrote it and I keep smiling. I'm so glad to have met you! You're so enthusiastic over the knights that I told my sister about them and you. She was laughing. She says she is glad there are great things happening up in head office. Aka my brain.
Honestly your story is really fantastic. Well written, really unique characters, a real plot and an amazingly nice author! I haven't finished yet bit trust me you 'll know when I do. My new love of commenting takes me around.
Sorry I took more than ten minutes to read through 2.3 ;)
As soon as I get my laptop I'm getting back to writing.

Ah, that make so much sense! I read it at like 3 am so it didn't click!

@ The Authoress
Yeah I've used it a few...dozen times. Put hidden love, just edit so it's more Authoress. ;)

i've been considering putting "hidden love" here bt it's so quizilla-ish :$

@ discoveringclouds
yeah i did try it but the story i was led to didn't capture an interest and i didn't want to leave an uninterested coment just for another reader :P i did get a swap for my story though :D haev you tried it??

@ The Authoress
Exactly! I'm an old pal and all I care is that you write. You write very goodly, and sometimes I just talk in a third person kind of way to get my thoughts out, well truly, I'm just trying to sound cool.

How's it going? Have you seen the comment swap feature yet?

Hahaha noooo don't worry about it, it sounds just as poetic here as it might in your head ;) I think my lack of poetic writing intimidates me and I feel like I should also write as goodly when replying but nah, you're an old pal and I doubt you think too much about my response as being not so poetic.. you probably like however I write :P it's the message that counts right =) hehe

and Yeah I heard about the train changing ways... I guess because I liked the original so much I couldn't see changes in it but now it might be even better! :)

Hehe thanks for the forum :) it's helpful!

Ah, thank you! You're helping me catch all these little ticks and misspells and I'm so truly grateful! I'm fixing them as you call them. Haha.

Haha, oh my goodness, I just got your comment. I'm grinning from ear to ear right now. I was like, no, no way, I was just talking to her, did it really? And then I was like YES OMG THIS IS REAL LIFE AND I'M GETTING COMMENTS FROM THE KNIGHTS.

Haha, I'm glad you like the color combo; I've always loved teal and I finally had an excuse to use it in a background. I ended up putting that author's note on most stories I've put on here; it just gets tiring when in my eyes it's not the layout that really matters--unless you've got some god awful lime green text on hot pink background going on--but the content of the story.

The King and I share the beheading of the chocolate bars in common. We would be good comrades.

*gasp* you subscribed?? Wow. I'm actually flattered you enjoyed it that much. I really do appreciate your comment on the story, and quite frankly I'm still smiling, so thank you so much for that! I'll try to fix the bout of laughter thing in just a moment.

Oh wow... 28??? This comment system is still a bit glitchy, isn't it?

I love commenting and giving constructive criticisms or any type of help, honestly I feel like it helps me see the errors in my own stories so I can fix them easier... if that makes any type of sense. It not only helps the person who's story you're reading, I feel like it helps you better your writing skills as well.

The knights are just awesome. I love coming up on comments they've left on stories I'm reading, I always have to see what they've said.

Glad I'm not the only one who doesn't take chapter titles as such a big deal!

Some people get on the swap expecting praise on no matter what the quality of their story is; that isn't what it's about. People are going to say things you don't like, and generally they don't mean harm, they're just trying to help... And if it's a story like that negative commentary can't be helped. I read one story where the girl was basically promoting self harm/suicide as a way to get back at an ex who wronged them. I couldn't be nice, I tried, but there was truly nothing good about the story and honestly some of the readers on here are young enough to possibly take that to heart. So sometimes things like that can't be helped.

I love comment swap, honestly. As much as I love my constant readers I feel like I get actual constructive comments this way.