Not a problem, I really enjoyed it! I'm actually working on reviews for the Mibba Magazine section of the site, and I was looking for dream/sleep/night related stories and poems to write a recommendation article for and I plan on recommending your poem. I'll post a link to the article when it's up =]
No problem :D hey thats awesome, you should always embrace those thoughts, expand and develop them, cos theyll help you create some semblance of an answer to the mysterious concepts and ideas of the universe.
Haha I just truly believe it can. It can persuade, it can touch people on an emotional level, and it can convey so many feelings and expressions that you feel you can't really say in your life without paper and a pencil. Or in my case, a computer as well.