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Why can't I so picture him thinking this ? xD Mostly the 'something else' part.
i couldn't bring myself to write vagina omg its so un sexual i'm sorry

BAHAHAH THE WHOLE 'I'm gay' between every sentence xD
yeah i was bored okay

WAS IT FRANKIE? I LOVED IT OH MY GOOODDDDD. BEST CHAPTER OK. Not for the sex. Not only. BUT THE COMING OUT AND THE JOIN THE CLUB THING. Sigh, you're killing me.
yusss that was fronk

oh and this is a line from a chapter i'm writing, it's a long way away from where you're reading (i think it's chapter 8 ish) but i'm dedicating it to you


CAN WE JUST GET MARRIED, OR

Wah! You're French? So cool! I had a pretty big obsession with all things French a while back, haha. And absolutely no problem!! I try to make the most out of comment swap because I think most people use it to get quality feedback and not just the generic "Great story, love the layout, keep going!" Cos I know I do :)

I'm really really glad it was helpful to you AND that you took the time to write back, you're so sweet :D

oops forgot to mention your username thingy is perf okay

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But I'm trailing off right here, erm. yes my english teacher must except she should of been proud omg i crack myself up
ms williams = hayleyyyy
taylor = yorkkkk
josh = franceschiiiii (lol josh farro and sex lol)
geelous lol
okay i'm in the middle of writing this uber cute chapter that's going to make you love frank and make you not want to shoot him with a penisgun(yeswhatisapenisgunimsolost)
okay oops frank has to be more dickish before he gets better soz
kks waiting for your comments on the next chapter
btw i have like 3 chapters on backlog waiting for my beta because she's being slow
sigh

SOBS YES I PRAY FOR FRERARD TOO I'M SO GLAD YOU FOUND SOME. okay lets answer your comments.
Now we will let Frank judge that skill of yours Gerard, won't we. hussshhh no hand jobs.... yet
I BELIEVE THERE IS A MISTAKE RIGHT HERE. Come on, I assure you, I'm practically sure you meant boys. again hussshhh he doesn't know he's gay.... yet
Come on Gerard, let me show you Frank's universe (=penis, I don't know if you saw Frank's tweet?) and we'll see what you're tempted to do to it. Fag. yesssss omg lol i nearly died at that tweet, i set my ipod to being called the universe lol i'm so smart
On a stick, eh? -wink wink nudge nudge- hussshhh mikey doesn't get dirty jokes he's too innocent

so omg your comments made me smile please comment again
btw let me know where you are so i can drop you suggestive hints
WINK WINK NUDGE NUDGE buttsex WINK WINK NUDGE NUDGE
lol jk no buttsex..........................................
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So, Joy, what's up?

Ahaha, yeah, but still, your story is very good. :P I'm Marissa, and you are?

Haha you probably wouldn't like many of my stories. I write a lot of het, and so when I DO write slash, it's not usually very good :P I just uploaded a few more slash one-shots yesterday involving Mr Gerard Way that you might enjoy :P

I was a beta for someone once and I picked out every little mistake... and they never contacted me back >.> I mean, that's what a beta is supposed to do. I wasn't about to sit there and be all, "whoa, this is amazing! Change NOTHING!" >_<"

Your chapters are a bigger font now :) Well done! You've mastered the layout creator! :P

Really? English is kinda boring. I prefer French. It's a very sexy language :P My favourite band sings a little in French and the singer speaks it sometimes in his interviews (which is terribly annoying) but OMG, he sounds amazing :P

Haha I AM from Australia! In a few weeks, I get to go to the outback for a week :P And I mean, imagine staring out into the horizon, and seeing nothing. Scary.

Thanks so much on your comment on my story c: And haha that's great that it'd peaked your interest! :D I get what your mean though, slash is more my thing as well. If you need another good couple, Fransykes is gorgeous. It's Oliver Sykes, I don't know if you know Bring Me The Horizon but he's the screamer and You Me At Six's Josh Franceschi. It's cute and I recomend it. c: Thanks again.

Hey, thanks for the story comment. I'd really love to hear your thoughts once you do read more :)

I always like to get feedback on my stories so I figure I can do the same for someone else then, that'd be cool so no worries :D

No problem :) I'm sorry if I came across so picky, but I like to receive comments like that that question everything.

Your current beta may actually have seen your mistakes, and just not pointed them out? Some people find it kinda awkward to pick apart everything.

I know how to change the font size to a larger one. It can be a bit annoying with the layout maker because it only shows you what the summary page looks like. All you have to do, really, is:
Go to your layout in the layout maker.
Hit the 'Summary' tab.
Under Summary, hit the smaller 'Text' tab.
Scroll down and check the size of the font. It's probably at about 12 points. Remember this number.
Then, go to the 'Text' tab.
Under Text, hit the smaller 'Text' tab.
Scroll down and find the size of the text. Write in the size that you remembered earlier.

That should do it. Your summary was fine, with size. I don't mind fixing it for you if you get lost with this part.

The lack of spaces was only a problem in your prologue. All you need to do there is go into edit chapters and add in some spaces between paragraphs/new lines to make it easier to read.

I really did like it :)

Considering you're French, you do a damn good job at writing in English :P I couldn't write like that in another language. I get as far as: "Je mapelle Rachael. Je suis Australienne." :P

Bahaha

Slave to Broken Hearts has been updated if you're interested.

Haha I don't think I have any up on here... I might have a cutsie Billie Joe one-shot, but that'd be about it lol.
When you have a fanfic that isn't Frerard, let me know ;)

That they are :P Good ones, at least. I think I only ever wrote shit ones XD

I used to read it years ago, but it lost my interest :/ I think because I was writing a Gerard/Billie Joe Armstrong story at the time, then I got into Green Day fanfics instead XD

Thank you for your comment :)

I'm the opposite, and am into a lot of MCR fics except Frerards :P

No, it wasn't confusing at all. I hate reading stories where there's like 15 different bands and EVERYONE is with someone. I like how you just added other bands without making every two people a couple. That way there's not 900 different plots going on at once.

Aww! Thank you so much for the comments. No, you weren't spamming at all! My face was like :D. I'm actually going to plan out the sequel this time lol. Thanks again <3

Thanks for the story comments! <33333
Haha yeah, bertard is never good :P Glad you're liking it so far!
Also, 'Life after the asteroid hit earth', I'm really glad you liked that. It was around that time that I first got interested in writing, and the fact that I won a prise for it was pretty awesome :)