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I did in fact note the way their characters built themselves, and I'm not done with my story yet. Steve and God both will probably undergo some serious change in their experiences.

I feel it's worth noting that Nate and I are both atheist.

@ arthur dent
The thing I like so much about Hikikomori that I don't really find in a lot of other literature is this complete disconnect from the world. Ellen and Tao live in their rooms. They exist in this small, physical space as far as we know, but really they don't even inhabit that. THey're both completely absorbed in their own minds, and the only outside interaction they seem to have is with each other. Their personalities are not revealed in an obvious way, they're slowly uncovered through ways of speaking and metaphoric stories. Something you should probably keep in mind for Psithurisma (I don't know if you already noticed this, I just thought I'd share) is the way that Tao and Ellen's characters are revealed through everything small, even down to the way they type, capitalize, punctuate, and spell, which differs between the two characters.

Thank you. I'm God, Nate is Steve. I've started to like Steve's character.
No, I've not read anything else. I'll have to once I finish Hikikomori.

@ arthur dent
I just read Psithurisma. I like it. I assume, since you have yet to finish Hikikomori, that you haven't read the other Bear Parade stories. You should. There are a few in particular that are very good, and pretty much all of them are written in a similar fashion to Hikikomori.

Yeah, true. It sort of goes all over reality, outside a bit, then creeps back in timidly with its tail between its legs. Great story though. We've got sixteen chapters up on both of our profiles.

@ arthur dent
I wouldn't know how to spoil it if I wanted to. The fact that you're writing a Hikikomori inspired story is super awesome.

It's great. I'm only around part 67 or so (not done, don't spoil) but me and my mate Nate are writing a Hikikomori-inspired story called Psithurisma.

@ arthur dent
It's trippy, yeah? Didya enjoy it?

I finally read Hikikomori and I think my life just went up down and inside-out.

I see. I feel as though I should comment more, and I do usually on things I really really enjoy, and also things that just seem to not be getting enough love. I feel also as though if a story has so many comments, mine might be looked over. If that makes sense.

Hah it's alright, I just figure people are busy or something of the sort.

I do know I don't comment as much on things as I used to though.

Hey, thanks for the comments on my stories, I really appreciate it.
Haha i don't usually get comments anymore.

Haha, thanks for the comment on Bloody Mary :)

Hiii. So, we talked about Hey Arnold the other day. And I found a sort of amusing blog on Tumblr called Texts From Helga Pataki. Oh my goodness. Its kinda great. I know you dislike Lila as much as I do and holy crap it accurately brings forth all of her awful annoying points and shows what a pain in the ass she'd be as a teenager. Oh yes, the texts are set during the gang's high school years. I just really like it and I thought if you didn't know about it you might enjoy it. :)

Sorry if this seemed random/weird!

I know, there are really stupid people.

Oh gosh, no. Not yet. I've been trying to hide from all those websites, but they're just THERE.

Get off my bus.

Shut ch'o mouth.

Yes. But you did not seem to acknowledge the gaspar. How rude.

gaspar.