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  • Annabelle Graceton

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    sorry to hear ur deactivated :(
    July 24th, 2012 at 09:17pm
  • Annabelle Graceton

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    Yeah, I could never be a teacher. I'm not good at speaking in front of people, even if it's just little kids. I get too nervous. And yet, I love to be on stage acting. Confusing right? :-p
    July 10th, 2012 at 07:59pm
  • Annabelle Graceton

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    Oh I totally agree. I hope to be an author. I just love writing and it's really the only thing that I can see myself doing with the rest of my life. It's something that I'm passionate about <3
    July 8th, 2012 at 05:06am
  • the4PonyGirls

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    Thanks, I've come to like my name too.
    In that case, the 'Comment Swap' would be a great feature for you, I take it.
    I can understand why you're not made to read the entire story. some are very long.
    Right now, my story needs someone to read through the later parts.
    Just that they have not done it yet. my story is much larger, then any single chapter can express, or make justice to.
    When ever you feel like it, my story is waiting.
    July 5th, 2012 at 09:57pm
  • the4PonyGirls

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    Since you asked, my name is Marlene.
    Seems you read plenty of stories? at least, it's what the impression I got while at uyour profile.
    Guess I like reading too, though I write too, I post the story here. Just seems to be hard to get a good comment?
    Curious, as to what make you choose a specific story.
    July 5th, 2012 at 12:53am
  • Annabelle Graceton

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    I'm studying English, though I don't really know what I'm going to do with it. All I really want to do is write <3 What about you? Any subjects you're passionate about?
    July 4th, 2012 at 08:11am
  • Annabelle Graceton

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    Yes, I'll be going into my third year of University in the fall. What about you? Where are you at with your schooling?
    July 4th, 2012 at 07:52am
  • skinny love.

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    That is totally fine! Haha, talk to you later!
    (:
    July 3rd, 2012 at 09:19pm
  • skinny love.

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    I will message you so no one else sees our ideas lol :D
    July 3rd, 2012 at 08:13pm
  • skinny love.

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    Hahahah aw <3

    I'm still trying to work out on how to start the chapter :c
    and I can help you!
    What do you want your next chapter to be about?
    July 3rd, 2012 at 08:00pm
  • skinny love.

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    Well something important for a climax, she should cave back into her bad habits, and somehow Jacob can either find out, or find her doing it, ya know?

    You really need to plan out your plot first and where you want it to go. Then chapter by chapter, plan it out.

    For now, take it slow with her coming home. She should still be secluded and getting used to being home. The boys can want her to come out, but she never feels like it, or makes up excuses, get where I'm going? She should still have those thoughts of doing what she shouldn't do. She uses her rubberbands a lot. - and in one chapter, something triggers her and so she begins to snap the rubber band and Jacob - or even some one else, worries, talks to her, or maybe freaks out.
    July 3rd, 2012 at 03:16am
  • Sunshining

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    Um, mostly indie stuff.
    Which horror movies were you watching?
    July 3rd, 2012 at 02:21am
  • skinny love.

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    Ooh, wow, that really is a good idea. I'll get to writing later on when I'm not lazy. I want to think more.
    Thank you!

    And now for you! (I don't get it, I'm always better will helping others than I am for myself)
    July 2nd, 2012 at 11:47pm
  • skinny love.

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    It's in first person, Lana's POV, the girl.
    and hmm, I could always switch to Louis' pov, but I'm not sure what he would think, ya know? :c

    And nooo, don't think that. I am such a writing Nazi and not many people get my praise with their writing. Even on my profile I only have a few people's stories that I claim are "Must Reads". When i get the time I will add yours on there. I honestly think your writing is amazing!

    And yes, I do get that way, mostly when I can't think of anything to write though. :/
    July 2nd, 2012 at 11:36pm
  • skinny love.

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    He already finds out in the chapter before.
    This next chapter, i guess it's like a filler, almost. meh. D:

    And oh sweetie, I'm so sorry. I definitely know how that is. Just these last few months I was bullied by my best friend - now ex. I ended up beating her up, lol. But I understand that. I am the EXACT same way, we're in the same boat.
    And you're story, you're piecing together your feelings in writing. That is one of the BEST coping skills to use. I do the same.
    Look at the stories on here. There are SO many, pretty much everyone, who express their feelings in their writing.

    Once you see my writing for the girl trying to commit suicide, you will understand how alike you and I are. You're not alone. People will always judge you, but they don't actually know you for their opinions to even matter. You know?
    July 2nd, 2012 at 11:25pm
  • skinny love.

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    1). It's actually about a girl, who was in college, and she ended up with an ED and depression from her self harm. Her brother is Liam Payne from the band One Direction. She promised she'd stop, but the thing is, when she comes home after college, she doesn't stop. The story will unravel with her and Louis falling in love, and he will find out about her, and later in the story, after the public seeing her scars, and the bullying from the 1D fans, she tries to commit suicide, and will end up in a hospital.

    But right now, I'm on Louis just finding out about what she does. She promises she'll stop. So the chapter that I am on now, it him taking her to a roller rink and stuff. and I have no idea how to start it out or write it :c
    lol..

    2.) I understand that. I was admitted for that too, and self harm. Plus I already have depression and anxiety and it's all crazy. We both have memories and things we can use in our stories. They are almost similar with the base of each story: The girls are going through rough times; suicide, self harm, depression, love.
    July 2nd, 2012 at 11:15pm
  • skinny love.

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    So you're saying you have been to a hospital too?
    (I was in one last November)
    July 2nd, 2012 at 11:07pm
  • skinny love.

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    And I'm almost finished with completing my Jacob story, but the last two chapters I'm having a bit of trouble on. :c
    And my Louis Tomlinson story, just the basics, planning out the chapters, writing the next one, which includes a small date at the roller rink, so it's a bit.. eh right now haha.
    July 2nd, 2012 at 11:06pm
  • skinny love.

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    Is it for the story that I have read?
    July 2nd, 2012 at 11:04pm
  • skinny love.

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    Maybe we can help each other!
    What are you stuck on?
    July 2nd, 2012 at 09:30pm