Oh my goodness thank you so much for your comment on my story. I wasn't sure if I would get much of any feedback at all and it just made me so happy. Thank you so much!
Thank you so much for your comment on Dropped! I really appreciate it! :)
Yeah, I really don't see myself making it any longer XD Maybe one day a companion story or something with more explanation, or a short continuation, but I don't really think there's much more I can do with it
Thank you very much for commenting on my essay/personal narrative story. This was a memory from about two years ago. Things have gotten better, not completely healed but better. We are still staying strong. Thank you for reading.
I noticed you are willing to read new writer's work and was wondering if you wanted to check mine out? I would be eternally grateful. If not that is is A-OK too! I hope you have a very lovely night! xoxoxo
Hi Ash! I'm Jess and I wanted to drop in and leave you a comment. First to thank you for the story comment and the friend request! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I'm also glad you liked the layout, I'm always afraid they're too simple. :) But again, thank you, comments make me giddy.
You mentioned the title in your story comment -- it's nothing elaborate but it does play a roll later on in the story ;D
Also, can I ask what you like to read? I took a peek at your own stories and they're all original, so do you just jump in once in a while to see fanfiction or is it just for fandoms you like?
Thank you so much for the comment on my story 'Christmas Dancing'! Also, thank you so very much for the pointers when I was explaining things. I did the story at one in the morning, and that's most likely why. ;P. But yeah, once again, thank you very much-o!
Thank you SO much for reading my stories Fixed in the Shadows and A Tiny Little Dot! I really appreciate your lovely comments. And don't worry, all will become clear! ;) And thank you for the friend request as well!
@ Ashes to Graphite My main advice with prose would that you don't have to describe every line of dialogue with some exciting adjective. I mean, while it's good to have words like growled, boomed, and then a description of a guy's voice; if you start doing that for every other line of dialogue, it starts becoming boring because you've over-written it. Most of the time what we say isn't boomed or anything like that, is it? So it's okay to reflect this in your writing. I hope that didn't come off as being too harsh.