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  • Mogar

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    Hey, just here to say that the winners for Three Words, One Story have been announced in this blog, you can check it out to if you've won any spots!
    September 30th, 2013 at 05:26pm
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    Crazy Oh my goodness thank you so much for your comment on my story. I wasn't sure if I would get much of any feedback at all and it just made me so happy. Arms Thank you so much!
    July 5th, 2013 at 06:11pm
  • ladyschrei

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    Thank you so much for your comment on Dropped! I really appreciate it! :)

    Yeah, I really don't see myself making it any longer XD Maybe one day a companion story or something with more explanation, or a short continuation, but I don't really think there's much more I can do with it XD
    June 29th, 2013 at 06:14am
  • Lost.In.My.Own.Mind

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    Hey, I put up another personal narrative if you were interesting in reading it. I just thought I would letcha know.
    June 4th, 2013 at 04:23am
  • Lost.In.My.Own.Mind

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    Thank you very much for commenting on my essay/personal narrative story. This was a memory from about two years ago. Things have gotten better, not completely healed but better. We are still staying strong. Thank you for reading.
    June 4th, 2013 at 03:17am
  • jacasaurusrex

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    I noticed you are willing to read new writer's work and was wondering if you wanted to check mine out? I would be eternally grateful. If not that is is A-OK too! I hope you have a very lovely night! xoxoxo
    March 8th, 2013 at 07:53am
  • Rooskaya;

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    Hi Ash! I'm Jess and I wanted to drop in and leave you a comment. First to thank you for the story comment and the friend request! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I'm also glad you liked the layout, I'm always afraid they're too simple. :) But again, thank you, comments make me giddy.

    You mentioned the title in your story comment -- it's nothing elaborate but it does play a roll later on in the story ;D

    Also, can I ask what you like to read? I took a peek at your own stories and they're all original, so do you just jump in once in a while to see fanfiction or is it just for fandoms you like?
    March 8th, 2013 at 06:22am
  • Emma_Joe_Ford

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    Thanks for the review on "The Aurora Cynosure"! I'm very glad you liked it. :)

    -Joe
    February 16th, 2013 at 12:38am
  • Robin 'The Sidekick'

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    Thank you so much for your story comment. I really appreciate it. And it was very hard to write.
    January 16th, 2013 at 08:36am
  • Perrie Edwards;

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    Thank you so much for the comment on my story 'Christmas Dancing'! Also, thank you so very much for the pointers when I was explaining things. I did the story at one in the morning, and that's most likely why. ;P. But yeah, once again, thank you very much-o!
    January 12th, 2013 at 04:18am
  • tabula rasa.

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    Thanks so much for the comment on my one-shot, Secret Lives of Creative Minds!
    January 11th, 2013 at 06:32am
  • hidans_hoe

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    Thank you SO much for reading my stories Fixed in the Shadows and A Tiny Little Dot! I really appreciate your lovely comments. And don't worry, all will become clear! ;) And thank you for the friend request as well!
    January 9th, 2013 at 12:25pm
  • theycallmeadreamer

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    Thank you for the comment! You're wonderful Cool
    January 4th, 2013 at 07:02am
  • spacejunkie

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    Cheers for the add and the kind words!
    December 31st, 2012 at 07:27am
  • Samira96

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    @ Ashes to Graphite
    My main advice with prose would that you don't have to describe every line of dialogue with some exciting adjective. I mean, while it's good to have words like growled, boomed, and then a description of a guy's voice; if you start doing that for every other line of dialogue, it starts becoming boring because you've over-written it. Most of the time what we say isn't boomed or anything like that, is it? So it's okay to reflect this in your writing. I hope that didn't come off as being too harsh.

    Do you have any advice for me?
    September 9th, 2012 at 09:27am
  • Ashes to Graphite

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    @ Samira96
    Thanks! Glad to know someone saw my forum post! Do you have any advice you'd be willing to give? Mr. Green
    September 9th, 2012 at 05:18am
  • Samira96

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    Hey, I'm Samira, and welcome to Mibba :)
    September 9th, 2012 at 03:51am