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@ Obsessive Writing
Haha, that's okay, I don't mind.

@ Ayana Sioux
Ok, got it.

Sorry I'm responding so late, but I wasn't able to (well. that's kind of a lie. I just didn't feel like) get on the computer.

@ Obsessive Writing
Okay, then I advise you not to listen to any of the OFWG people except for Frank Ocean and/or The Internet. But if you don't like LGBT people, then not them either, haha. Everyone else is cool, though, I guess.

@ Ayana Sioux
Yeah, I guess I can say that I am.

@ Obsessive Writing
Some of them yeah, some, maybe not, haha. Are you a religious person?

@ Ayana Sioux
I didn't mention everyone I listen to either, because I only listen to 0ne or two songs. Like Erykah Badu, I only know her song Window Seat, and only know Thinking Bout You by Frank Ocean. It's always stuck in my head. I don't really listen to the new songs by singers like Beyonce, Rihanna, Chris Brown anymore. I listen to their old songs.

I don't even know half of those people on your list, and barely listen to the other half. I may have to check some of them out sometime.

It's ironic as hell because I'm actually listening to MJB right now, ahha. But that's cool. Your taste is almost like my sisters. But my list is a little different. I listen to Amy Winehouse, Ayo, Birdy, Earl (From OFWG), Erykah Badu, Frank Ocean (OFWG), Ice Cube, Hodgey Beats (OFWG), The Internet (OFWG), J. Cole (one of my favs), used to listen to Kanye West, Jessie Ware, M.I.A., Maxwell, Tyler the Creator (OFWG), Miguel, Nas, Nneka, Sade, Sizzla, Talib Kweli, Tupac, The Weekend, 50 Cent.

I actually left some people out because I only have about a couple of their songs, but more people will probably be added, like Tiara Thomas. Oh, and I used to listen to Akon and Chris Brown.

@ Ayana Sioux
Mary J. Blige, Alicia Keys, Jennifer Hudson, Keyshia Cole, Usher, Estelle, Neyo, Melanie Fiona, Michael Jackson, Chris Brown, Jazmine Sullivan, Keri Hilson, Ledisi, Akon, Sade, Monica, Ciara, Amerie, TLC, Maxwell, Shontelle, Brandy, Trey Songz, B.O.B., Sean Kingston, The D.E.Y., Mariah Carey, Timbaland, Beyonce, and Rihanna. I basically gave you almost a full list of who's on my youtube playlist Mary J. Blige is my favorite singer, though, and my favorite song is I Remember Me by Jennifer Hudson.

@ Obsessive Writing
True. I don't mess with cockroaches. Those things are disgusting.

Who do you listen to, though?

@ Ayana Sioux
Ok, I'll do that, thanks for your advice. I had them slowed down at first, but then it felt like it was too dragged. I'll edit it tomorrow. I only know two songs by Janelle Monae, Cold War and Tightrope, but I like her style and how she presents herself.

Haha, yeah. My family is always calling me smart.

I kind of over exaggerated. I'd probably thump the bug off of me. Unless that bug was a cockroach, or a mosquito. The only bugs that I probably wouldn't thump or kill is rollie pollies, caterpillars, centipedes, grasshoppers, crickets, ladybugs, butterflies, moths, and possibly worms.

@ Obsessive Writing
I watched the video. The only suggestion I have is to maybe slow down the longer verses so the viewer can have time to read it, and to use the instrumental version of that song. And I didn't know you listened to Janelle Monae. I don't listen to her, but I do listen to people that sing music similar to the kind she does.

And that's good that you don't cram. You seem very smart so I'm sure you'll be fine.

When a bug lands on me, depending on the bug, I don't really freak out. I don't really kill them either if I'm outside because well, they're outside.

@ Ayana Sioux
I won't. I never cram study. I'll read over the lessons on studyisland.com and then take the tests. Hopefully, it'll help.

I'm done with it, now. I just copied and pasted each powerpoint slide onto paint, then added the pictures onto windows movie maker. The powerpoint was much better than the video, though. Here's a link if you want to check it out before I send it to my teacher http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h4kGLzx8uZE

Oh my. I would've been grossed out, and rubbing my tongue. I'm not squeamish or anything when I see a bug, but if it lands on me then it's dead.

I'll try to do that. I barely think out loud, I say everything in my mind.

Oh, cool. I still don't know what I want to get into in college. I'm thinking either creative writing, veterinary medicine, or agriculture.

Ha, I wasn't too good at algebra in high school. I much preferred geometry and trigonometry. But don't worry too much. Just don't cram study or anything like that.

I feel you, though. I have to do a video of my class because my professor is an asshole that didn't let us just present the project we already put together. I'm really tired of school. I really don't like it.

Random fact: I just came to my universities library to get on here and I accidentally ate a bug on the way. It tasted like grass. I took it out of my mouth, though. If it had tasted worse, I would have been really disgusted.

I'm actually pretty good at Spanish. And I feel you about the conversation thing. What I do to fix it really is to just practice it. I think out loud a lot and sometimes I would say things in Spanish out loud instead of saying it in English. Once you keep practicing sentences that are used a lot, they just come naturally.

I'm majoring in visual communications which is equivalent to graphic design. But I want to transfer to another school because art isn't their forte at this school.

@ Ayana Sioux
Aww. Well, I'm sure you'll be able to find some free time.

Actually, you don't sound like an old person. Haha. At least not to me, anyway. I wish school came without worries. I'm worried that I won't be able to pass the algebra eoct. I understand half of the algebra lessons and don't understand the other half. Just last night I had a dream that I was about to be late for the eoct. It was a pretty weird dream (what dream isn't?).

Worried about this video poem. Like I said above, I had to write a poem about war. But, I also have to make a video of it. The problem is, I started off using powerpoint, and now I'm trying to find a way to convert it into a movie file. Good thing I have time. It's due on the 12th.

And Spanish. This is my 2nd year taking it, but I can't even hold up a conversation in Spanish, much less understand a word someone else is saying. I mostly can just recognize the words written down. And now, I'm going to take it next year, too.

What are you majoring in, in college?

@ Obsessive Writing
No, that answered my question. I'm just happy you didn't up and leave mibba. I would have cried. Haha, not really, but it would kind of suck. I haven't been on mibba for a minute, either, but this isn't the first time it's happened. I come and go on mibba in patterns. I'm always on it in the summer, some times during the fall, I'm gone in the winter and spring, the near the end of the spring and beginning of the summer, I start coming back on. Then the cycle continues like that.

That's destined to change, though, because I plan on getting a job over the summer, and after some time (about three and a half years, hopefully), I'll probably graduate college, which means work and little play, which means mibba will be visited randomly.

But anyway. How's school? (I sound like an old person asking you that, haha)

@ Ayana Sioux
Yeah, I know. Haven't really been much in the mood for writing, lately.

Until this assignment for my literature class came up. I have to write a poem about a war and it has to be more than a minute long. I already started it but I'm not sure my teacher will like it very much.

I guess I could say that I've been too busy to write, but there's never a time where one could be too busy to write, so that's just a poor excuse.

Basically, I was spending all of my time playing games on the internet, and now I'm spending all of my time reading. Hopefully, I'll find some things to write about, soon. I should really probably stop observing the world passing me by, which just inspired me to write a new poem.

Not sure if all of this answered your question

You've been gone for a minute. What's up!!??!!

@ Manbear-n'-Me!
Your welcome

Hey!
Thanks for your awesome comment on my story! It really helps; I get so little feedback on it so it's nice to know that I'm doing okay with "showing" the readers what I want to.
I'm flattered that you didn't suspect what was in the box...I know it was a bit gory. But one of my goals in that story was to be unpredictable.

Thanks again for taking your time and giving me the feedback. I really do appreciate it!

Poems and stories. I wrote a mystery once, lots of fantasy, realistic fiction. I'll write anything though, as long as it's fiction, just like I'll read anything that's fiction. I wrote a few humorous poems, a few inspirational, a few sad. I'll post some on this site soon.