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Thanks for all the wonderful ideas! I don't think I could pull off the love triangle idea but the other option seems plausible. I definitely like the idea of writing a relationship that started before the story does so I think I will make Jon have a rocky relationship to start off. Instead of having only one female lead, how about two? Have Jon's female teammate or best friend (not sure how I want to connect them yet) meet Zayn and fall for him while they are in the middle of Jon and his girl's relationship woes. I've been toying with the idea of having four main characters for a while and this might be the perfect time to try it? Let me know what you think!

@ Colby_Armstrong9
2) Jonathan, Zayn, Patrick and Harry are close friends since meeting at 1D's Soldier Field concert and are the most eligible bachelors in the social media industry. There, Jon and Zayn spot a girl they both take a liking to and want to make her theirs- but they don't tell one another. This girl is anything but ordinary, and wants to live her live in peace alone and away from her past. But during their time fighting for her attention, she opens their eyes to more than girls, money and partying. Meanwhile, Pat and Harry have their own confrontations with the female population, and what it will cost to put their lives back on track the way it was back in 2010...for all of them.

@ Colby_Armstrong9
1) Jonathan just broke up with his long time model girlfriend and comes off nonchalant and turns to Kane for parties and girls. She goes back to LA where the MTV Music Awards will be happening and she's presenting her long time pals One Direction an award, and confides in bad boi Zayn about her break up. I was possibly thinking Zayn could be more 'tall, dark and handsome' in this plot just because of the boys' 5 year age difference (: but Zayn's sexy enough as it is ! Haha

@ Colby_Armstrong9
I definitely would love to help you come up with some more fascinating ideas !! A penny for thought, I also loved how you incorporated Niall, (love him <33), as a main secondary character to make Zayn jealous hopefully that helps for some thoughts on the next story line, but if you want to change things up, why not replace him with Harry or one of the other boys !?(: I'll get back to ya soon !

Thank you for your kind review! It means the world to me that you took the time to comment! I would be glad to write another story with Jonathan and Zayn story. If you have any ideas for one message me back. It will probably take me some time to think of an idea for the plot and start writing so I'm totally open to suggestions as I'm planning!

Thanks for your comment on Take a Chance... I edited my stories after I have completed them x

I'm glad! :D it really means a lot <3 I really appreciate it!
Lol that's cool. I don't know who he is. :p I don't, sorry. :/

@ blown away;
Anytime! I'm a huge reading nerd, especially when it comes to my fav celebs , and I'm a big fan of your stories!! Keep it up, and if you're a fan, do you have any Michael Frolik stories in mind?:D I have a friend on here who likes him too<33 lol

Hey! Thanks for the rec on Addicted to Your Love! :D it really means a lot! I will try to update again soon as i can! (:

I know. I'm sad he's with Winnipeg too :( It just doesn't seem fair but makes sense with cap. And that's a good idea :D Especially not being a slash

@ thelovelyreader
That's great to hear welcome! Niall has really changed in three years and I can see the new him as the character you're portraying him asC:

Thank you so much for the recommendation and for the lovely comment on Soulcrusher! I'm gonna try to update more often but I can't promise anything! :D

@ Captain-Sassy-Crocs
No problem! I'm an English major and I always love reading any type of story- especially if it has Jonny Tazer in it hahaha

Thank-you for the rec on my one shot. It makes me happy knowing that other people enjoy reading my work enough to recommend it to others. Thanks again!

Thank you so much for commenting on Cloudy. It means the world that you think my writing is good. I am absolutely in love with this story and where it is heading, so I hope you will stick through it with me.

Xoxo