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Haha well you now feel my pain, seems like all my favorite book/movie characters end up dead.

Ramble all you want lol Whatever you choose to write next ill be happy to read it.

LOL it made me smile when I wrote it

Haha, it's okay. At least he lived up to what he was willing to do for his friends, but sureeee you go off and kill the guys I like! haha.

Well I'm glad that you wouldn't be bored by my story. In hind sight it actually would make a pretty cool book. My next story, not sure which will be up first, but it may not be horror :S ... then again, I do have another in mind. . . and I'm rambling on your page haha.

I got to read chapter six and some of chapter seven. Gotta admit, that deer guts thing made me smile because I wasn't expecting it to be that gross. haha. Loved it!

@ The J
That's okay, just let me know what you think when you do get the chance to read them.

Fat Bill gave you hope in humanity and I had him slaughtered haha Maybe I am good at writing horror stories lol

Bore me? I don't think you could bore me! I would love to hear the story!

I can't wait to read your next story! It's okay lol write me a novel anytime, I enjoy talking to you

Posted just for me eh? I'm excited! I don't have time right now to read them only a quick moment to hop on and let you know that I got all your comments and stuffs and that I'm super excited to know what's gonna happen! I still miss Fat Bill though haha. Those kinds of characters make me have some hope for humans.. the kind that would sacrifice themselves for their friends.

And yes, living near the woods here does make it easier to write scary stories, especially with the drama that happens in this town. And it's small too, so it's really strange things happen like this. What's even better is where I used to live as a teenager, which is where my story took place on here. A few years ago a bunch of people were murdered and a few more killed themselves. It was gaining weird publicity too, and there were details about the murders that the cops had to hide (but they shared them with my brother because he works with them..and I just realized how made up this all sounds, but I swear, it's the truth lol .. If i told you the entire story it'd make sense but I don't wanna bore you)....

anyways, I think I'd like to start writing my next horror story about the things that happened there, and the weird things I experienced...

Damn, I wrote you an entire novel.. :P sorry. haha. ^^

@ The J
You live next to woods where cops chase people into? Sounds like good inspiration for writing a scary story!
That's cool that the music made it seem intense like a movie. I'm really glad you like my story and I hope you like the rest of it and my future stories.
I'm relieved to read the part about me getting to the action quickly. I was a bit worried that I dragged the beginning out too long without any action. Didn't want people getting bored and quitting before the killer even showed up.
But all the slasher movies seem to begin with that happy "everything's going to be okay" part. Then once you forget it's a horror movie, half a body goes flying through the window! Haha!
Rain and thunderstorms are my favorite weather too! I feel so much more creative and focused when it's pouring rain outside. And there's no better time to be outside than when a big storm is just about to hit. Gets the adrenaline pumping. The only part I dislike about storms is when the power goes out. That sucks.
So anyway I thought I'd give you an update, I just finished chapter 8 today. I think it's going to be 10 chapters but that could change. In my opinion the story is getting more intense as it goes so be excited! lol
I'm going to try to finish it as soon as possible so when I do get to post more I can just post it all. We'll see how it goes.

No problemo ;)

And yes, reading horror stories while living right next to the woods DOES make it scarier. Especially at night time! haha. What plays to my fears even more is numerous times the police have chased people in to the woods and they always come out near my house since there are trails behind it. So! I do get creeped out easily.

I can't wait until you update! And yeah, if I listen to music while I write it's too distracting. But as I was reading what you wrote it made it seem super intense. Almost movie like.

I didn't say it before, but I also like how you went right to the action, sometimes a story can drag on before they get to the main purpose of the story. Some "road paving" is needed, but I'm glad that the action started off sooner than later.

Thunderstorms= my favorite weather. We had some AMAZING ones here over the summer. I love it. Sadly it's fall and we don't get many here in the fall. Winter brings blizzards though, and I LOVE being cooped up and writing during a snow storm. =]

@ The J
Thank you for being my first comment! It does help to know that someone is enjoying what I write.
Awesome! I have my own cheerleader!
Your guesses are interesting..you'll just have to wait to find out ;)
Thanks for the kind words. The woods? My story takes place in the woods so that does probably add a little scare to it!
Btw I listened to that music you recommended. It was good but I can't listen to music when I write, too distracting. Sometimes though ill listen to the sounds of a thunderstorm.

Hey look here! No comments on thy profile? Well, I can fix that! ^^

I'm really glad that you're gonna continue the story. A lot of people get discouraged when there's a lack of feedback, but here I am! I'll be your "Cheerleader". :)

As for my guesses with Suzette... hmm... maybe she forgot something downstairs, and really thought she needed it..so she figured she could sneak down and get it? or ... maybe the killer somehow lured her out? Thinking maybe it was Fat Bill still alive despite what they were told? :P I'm looking forward to finding out though!

And no problem for recommending it, it's good and worth the read! I'm all about Horror stories. Love horror movies too but I live right next to the woods so I sometimes do creep myself out. haha.

Happy writing :D