polishpearlsparis / Comments

  • Overflowing Ashtray

    Overflowing Ashtray (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    Believe me, I’m just as excited to write it! I keep wanting to fast forward to what I have planned but I am somehow managing to restrain myself in order to let it happen as naturally as possible. Thank you for supporting this story for so many years. It truly means a lot!
    November 4th, 2016 at 04:18pm
  • no.one.is.home

    no.one.is.home (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    80
    Location:
    Cayman Islands
    I really appreciate your comment on Buzzkill a few months back. After thinking about what you and your fellow commenters said, I decided you were right. I'm turning it into a story and chapter two is already up. Thanks for your support!
    September 14th, 2014 at 02:08am
  • semisweet.

    semisweet. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    36
    Location:
    United States
    Thanks for the comment on Team! Ashlee and I really appreciate it!
    March 27th, 2014 at 02:55am
  • fangirl1999

    fangirl1999 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    99
    Location:
    United States
    Thanks:) I'm glad that their feelings and thoughts are evident to readers the way they are in my mind.

    I feel like this story is a novel! Some day I would love to self publish something but we'll see if I ever get there, I have enough trouble just finishing fanfic.
    March 24th, 2014 at 05:51pm
  • fangirl1999

    fangirl1999 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    99
    Location:
    United States
    @ polishpearlsparis
    I actually wrote the Josey cheating scene, some of it from Zach's point of view, but I decided not to include it. I had some Jon cheating aftermath too but it all just seemed too depressing. But maybe I could post some of it separate from this story, maybe rework it to just be Parise's point of view. That way it wouldn't be so depressing. Hmm that might be interesting, I'll think on that more.

    I started a separate Parise story, wrote a couple chapters but it just felt blah. I'd like to write about him sometime. But it's harder to write about married players like they are single!
    February 21st, 2014 at 05:38am
  • polishpearlsparis

    polishpearlsparis (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    @ fangirl1999
    Jon is definitely not the best Josey can do. She could have anyone but Jon has this invosie hold on her heart that she can't seem to forget. Are you going to do a side story or ones hot as to how Zach was after what happened or maybe him running into Jon and Josey and his thoughts? Can't wait to read the next update.
    February 21st, 2014 at 04:53am
  • fangirl1999

    fangirl1999 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    99
    Location:
    United States
    Thanks for your comment on my Toews story! It makes me really happy to know that someone is enjoying my story so much that they read it again.

    Yeah, both Jon and Josey were annoyingly stubborn in that chapter that they wouldn't make the first move towards each other.

    Josey is perfect for Jon but I don't know if he's the best she can do. But that doesn't really matter because she loves him and wants him.

    Parise isn't going to show up that much more. I wrote him into the epilogue and he might get featured some in when the Hawks play the WIld, but I don't really have big plans for that.
    February 21st, 2014 at 04:19am
  • Hockeywife

    Hockeywife (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    39
    Location:
    Canada
    Thanks so much for the comment!
    December 26th, 2013 at 01:43am
  • polishpearlsparis

    polishpearlsparis (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    I loved how long it was. Helped pass the time. When stupid people drop their side of a very very heavy table, you end up on crutches.
    December 17th, 2013 at 06:39am
  • fangirl1999

    fangirl1999 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    99
    Location:
    United States
    Thanks! This chapter was a lot of work, so I'm glad that people enjoyed it and appreciated the effort! Originally I thought that it was going to be short, but somehow it ended up to be the longest one yet.

    I hope all is ok with you and your ER visit!
    December 16th, 2013 at 11:47pm
  • Hockeywife

    Hockeywife (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    39
    Location:
    Canada
    Thanks gor reccomending my story :)
    December 11th, 2013 at 01:12pm
  • polishpearlsparis

    polishpearlsparis (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    I would agree with the fact that Jon's lucky that Josey's put up wit his bs for so long. That's a different way to write. I love reading stories like this, but most of the time I wait until stories are completed because I have the patience of a gnat and hate waiting for updates. I love seeing this update show up in my emails. You can't put this story down because it's so good. :)
    December 10th, 2013 at 08:32pm
  • fangirl1999

    fangirl1999 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    99
    Location:
    United States
    @ polishpearlsparis
    Sadly Jon isn't done being a stupid boy yet. Recall in the first couple chapters when they are together in January, Jon hasn't contacted Josey since she left Chicago, so she can't figure him out. He's lucky Josey has put up with him for so long.

    I actually had a lot of this story written by the time I started posting. Some chapters were finished, some nearly finished, some half done. I just write whatever strikes me at the moment, so I tend to write out of order. It's a little harder with a story like this jumping around in time to figure out how to put it all together. I can't recall when I wrote the epilogue, but it was actually early on. Yes, it does help to know where you are going!

    I have a lot of the next chapter nearly written. Well I guess it kind of depends where I decide to break the chapters. I think the next chapter will end up shorter than the last couple, unless I just shove everything left into one chapter (probably not) for the rest of her visit. I actually was just writing a bit of a scene that occurs the next day just now. I can't really put this story aside very well!
    December 10th, 2013 at 06:44pm
  • polishpearlsparis

    polishpearlsparis (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    @ fangirl1999
    Jon's going to make things worse? Josey's not going to want anything to do with him, if he keeps mentioning other fuck buddies and fucks. I can't wait to read and find out what he's going to do. Jon is still eons away from realizing that Josey is perfect for him and by the time he realizes it, Josey will have found someone who deserves her and doesn't just screw her when he's in town. I wonder what Jon would do if he found out Josey was actually dating someone else. It would be interesting to see his reaction, because I think he would be furious because he thinks Josey is "his" and he likes it that way. I think his feelings are slowly creeping up on his and oen day, he's just going to have an epiphany. Glad to hear that Zach will show up sometime in the future. Can't believe you've already written the epilogue without the rest of the story. I guess it will make it easier because you know where you want to end up, you just have to write the rest of the story to get there. Have a good relaxing few days so you can write the enxt chapter in an amazingly well written book. :)
    December 10th, 2013 at 06:18pm
  • fangirl1999

    fangirl1999 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    99
    Location:
    United States
    Thanks for the comment and the rec, just noticed that! I'm glad that you enjoyed the last chapter, it was a lot of work. I'm taking a little break for a day or two before getting going on the next chapter.

    Jon is a little slow at realizing that Josey is perfect for him. Sadly he's going to make things worse with his cluelessness.

    Zach Parise will show up in again, but probably not for a while. At the very least, he's in the epilogue that I already wrote!
    December 10th, 2013 at 04:25pm
  • fangirl1999

    fangirl1999 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    99
    Location:
    United States
    Hey I left you a group comment in the comments section of my Toews story. I also wanted to say thanks for the compliment on my writing! I'm very happy that you are enjoying it so much and checking out other stories.
    December 6th, 2013 at 03:32am
  • polishpearlsparis

    polishpearlsparis (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    @ fangirl1999
    I'll check out two wrongs but I loved Heartbeat Slowing Down. I never really thought l of it being a bad boy Toews story. Thanks. :)
    December 4th, 2013 at 01:48pm
  • fangirl1999

    fangirl1999 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    99
    Location:
    United States
    Bad boy Toews stories:

    http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/477947/Two-Wrongs/

    http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/468436/Heartbeat-Slowing-Down/
    (warning, this one is very sad and kind of disturbing, he's TOO bad)
    December 4th, 2013 at 06:33am
  • polishpearlsparis

    polishpearlsparis (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    @ fangirl1999
    It's a shame how some guys can be wig girls who are like that and most likely there for their status and money. They give us girls who love watching hockey but also aren't blind nd notice the players a bad name and rep. It also doesn't help wanting to work in the male dominated world of sports someday being a girl. I've never met him so I wouldn't really know how he is, but the pr people are doing a good job if he's a jerk because he seems like a good guy. At least to me. I'd agree that just because they're famous they aren't exactly nice little choir boys who are a joy to be aroun and nice all the time. Yeah it'd be nice but its not reality. I blame society because we hold them to higher standards than the reat of the world. I don't honk I've read any bad boy Toews stories and that's why our story was so refreshing to me. Do you happen to remember the name of one or a few? I love reason stories where what's written is completely unexpected. They probably don't hate each other but it works for this story. And because it's your story, you can write about whatever and write people however you want. :)
    December 4th, 2013 at 06:21am
  • fangirl1999

    fangirl1999 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    99
    Location:
    United States
    I think people idolize Toews too much. I don't know if you know much about his gf, but she's kinda yucky, and he has a history of being involved with a long line of similar women. Apparently that is what he likes, how disappointing. Plus there are stories about him behaving badly at times, treating people poorly. Combine all that with how he acted in the last playoffs, and he sort of turned me off and I had to put the story aside for a few months. I had no interest in him for a while. I got over it though. My fictional Jon can be whatever I want him to be, although I try to keep him similar to real Toews:)

    Real people aren't perfect, they have flaws and make mistakes and treat other people badly. Some people are more of an asshole than others and just because they are a famous NHL player doesn't make them a nice guy, despite whatever image the PR people pushed super hard about him.

    Honestly I get bored by stories where people are too perfect! I have actually read a few bad boy Toews stories now that I think about it, maybe you haven't seen them though.

    I'm totally making up the hatred between Parise and Toews. I actually don't know what they think about each other, I'd be interested to find out.
    December 4th, 2013 at 06:09am