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  • fool's paradise

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    Basically, yep. There'll be a few changes here and there. The guy in chapter three is Rusty, if you're curious.

    It's basically the same thing, just more detail and substance to the plot. I couldn't finish the original because I had no idea what to do with it.

    And how did you know my secret real name? O_o
    November 3rd, 2009 at 03:13am
  • mr. owl

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    Thanks for the comment on Disease! :D

    I'm glad you like it so far.
    :D I will see what I can do with it.. Hahha.
    October 10th, 2009 at 07:17am
  • AJDWriter

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    Don't worry. She'll get it back. ;)
    September 11th, 2009 at 08:58am
  • AJDWriter

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    Yeah, that was my main goal. I wanted Daniel to be the sweeter boy, but he still had his flaws, such as the desperate want for a child and the emotional flares. James is the bad boy with the secrete and rare sensitive side. He puts up a good front. The boys were such great friends before Audrey because they were similar, just not at first glance. They both fell for Audrey because she has fire and spirit. Now, she's strayed from that side of her but each guy has both a soft and hard side. For each guy, one side is more prominent than the other, but both can relate to Audrey's changing moods.
    September 10th, 2009 at 09:07am
  • AJDWriter

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    I tried writing them in different ways. I wanted them each to have different personalities and views, but at the same time still be able to get along...well, before the whole Audrey thing, lol.
    September 9th, 2009 at 05:30am
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    Wow, really? Unusually everyone is after James, lol.
    September 8th, 2009 at 06:56pm
  • bomb diggity

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    Heyyy! Haha, I keep saying this, but thank you for the story comment! :D

    And in response to your question, I'm a sucker for drama and if Jacob just told Kat she's the imprint, possible dramatic scenes might not be able to happen.
    Hehe, but don't worry. She'll find out soon enough. She's not that silly. :]
    September 5th, 2009 at 10:22am
  • TavarElda

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    Sorry, been busy this week so I haven't got on, no she wasn't shot, I need to go back and clarify that, the guy struck at her with a knife, so she was slashed across the back.

    Hopefully see you soon with my next update!
    August 22nd, 2009 at 07:24pm
  • Conspiracies!

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    Hey , thanks for the comment ! [ =
    I'm really glad you like it , I'm even gladder that you don't usually do fanfics .

    Haha .
    August 21st, 2009 at 04:58am
  • bomb diggity

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    Hey! Thanks for the comment again. <3
    I'd never tell. :x But you'll find out soon, don't worry. Hehe.
    I'm trying to update by this weekend. And now that I've said that, I've got to do it. :]
    August 21st, 2009 at 03:47am
  • AJDWriter

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    Pretty much. I mean, on occasion they'll do different things to her; but, mainly whip since that's the title of the story.
    August 13th, 2009 at 06:02am
  • facing.reality

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    thank you so much for the awesome story comment! (:
    August 12th, 2009 at 06:57pm
  • bomb diggity

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    Thanks for the comments, and I'm glad you like the new layout. I can't believe I made people read my story with the old layout. It seriously sucked. x)

    Hehe, I looooove Victoria. I honestly think she was like the only real danger that the Cullens really needed to worry about.
    August 12th, 2009 at 03:30pm
  • xKissxThexRainx

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    I see that you like psycho by puddle of mudd
    August 12th, 2009 at 07:48am
  • bomb diggity

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    Okay, firstly, thanks so much for the joke. I really needed that today.
    And secondly, LMAO. Awesome joke. xD
    You seriously rock. <3
    August 7th, 2009 at 08:11pm
  • jenesaispas

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    http://www.mibba.com/story/melanielovesjonas/Coral-Island/ mind checking it out ?
    August 7th, 2009 at 05:44pm
  • facing.reality

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    thank you oh so much for the story comment, dear!<3 (:
    August 1st, 2009 at 08:12pm
  • xlaura17x

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    ehe he was just starting to get better before he punched Jo
    :] Thank you for your story comment xox
    August 1st, 2009 at 11:38am
  • facing.reality

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    thank you for the awesome story comment!<33 (:
    July 30th, 2009 at 10:50pm
  • xlaura17x

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    i know, it's about time Alec realised what he put her through :]
    gah love for you and your comments xox
    July 30th, 2009 at 10:09pm