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Basically, yep. There'll be a few changes here and there. The guy in chapter three is Rusty, if you're curious.

It's basically the same thing, just more detail and substance to the plot. I couldn't finish the original because I had no idea what to do with it.

And how did you know my secret real name? O_o

Thanks for the comment on Disease! :D

I'm glad you like it so far.
:D I will see what I can do with it.. Hahha.

Don't worry. She'll get it back. ;)

Yeah, that was my main goal. I wanted Daniel to be the sweeter boy, but he still had his flaws, such as the desperate want for a child and the emotional flares. James is the bad boy with the secrete and rare sensitive side. He puts up a good front. The boys were such great friends before Audrey because they were similar, just not at first glance. They both fell for Audrey because she has fire and spirit. Now, she's strayed from that side of her but each guy has both a soft and hard side. For each guy, one side is more prominent than the other, but both can relate to Audrey's changing moods.

I tried writing them in different ways. I wanted them each to have different personalities and views, but at the same time still be able to get along...well, before the whole Audrey thing, lol.

Wow, really? Unusually everyone is after James, lol.

Heyyy! Haha, I keep saying this, but thank you for the story comment! :D

And in response to your question, I'm a sucker for drama and if Jacob just told Kat she's the imprint, possible dramatic scenes might not be able to happen.
Hehe, but don't worry. She'll find out soon enough. She's not that silly. :]

Sorry, been busy this week so I haven't got on, no she wasn't shot, I need to go back and clarify that, the guy struck at her with a knife, so she was slashed across the back.

Hopefully see you soon with my next update!

Hey , thanks for the comment ! [ =
I'm really glad you like it , I'm even gladder that you don't usually do fanfics .

Haha .

Hey! Thanks for the comment again. <3
I'd never tell. :x But you'll find out soon, don't worry. Hehe.
I'm trying to update by this weekend. And now that I've said that, I've got to do it. :]

Pretty much. I mean, on occasion they'll do different things to her; but, mainly whip since that's the title of the story.

thank you so much for the awesome story comment! (:

Thanks for the comments, and I'm glad you like the new layout. I can't believe I made people read my story with the old layout. It seriously sucked. x)

Hehe, I looooove Victoria. I honestly think she was like the only real danger that the Cullens really needed to worry about.

I see that you like psycho by puddle of mudd

Okay, firstly, thanks so much for the joke. I really needed that today.
And secondly, LMAO. Awesome joke. xD
You seriously rock. <3

http://www.mibba.com/story/melanielovesjonas/Coral-Island/ mind checking it out ?

thank you oh so much for the story comment, dear!<3 (:

ehe he was just starting to get better before he punched Jo
:] Thank you for your story comment xox

thank you for the awesome story comment!<33 (:

i know, it's about time Alec realised what he put her through :]
gah love for you and your comments xox