Hi there,I'm working on a story and I'm looking for as much feedback on it as I can get. So, if anyone else out there would like to get some feedback on one of their stories I'm totally up for it.There are of course some simple rules.1. You comment first. - I'm not giving until I get. But you might have to wait until tomorrow to get your comment. It's getting late here. But I will let you know...

So, in school today our form teacher told us we were going to have a “meeting” about what was bugging us about the course, and such. That we’d be able to talk about anything that was bothering us. Fair enough. I knew the subject of Jay/Niki(girls in my class who get in trouble alot) would come up. Because the principle would be there.Which is fair enough. But all I could think about was no....

This is kind of hard for me to write, because I know and accept that it's a real thing, that it's a serious matter. But at the same time I just find it hard to take seriously. Does that make sense?Today I found out that someone quite close to me has it. And since then I've jsut been like...... whoa. Because I just wasnt expecting it, you hear that someone is really sick and the first thing that...

Happy Valentines Meebs. Since I dont actually have one, this is just another silly day to me.It's 12.40pm here, so that means I should be in school right now, but I'm not, because I have the flu.Which I think is a first, I dont think before now I've ever had the flu. I used to be pretty, ungetsickable. (Couldn't think of a better word) But I used to never get sick, until like last September '10....

"People face decisions every day. Some, infact most choices they make without even considering it, "apple or orange", "this or that?". Simple everyday choices, that make absoloutly no difference to life. But then you come to those decisions, the ones which require far more consideration. The ones where you have to weigh up the pros and cons of each option. The ones that keep you up at night.And...

I've honestly not been around much recently. And I really do apologise for that, everything has been such a pain, school and finding work experience, home and my monster, and then finding time to write on top of that.I've just not been on here as much as I'd want to be. Which is actually a lie, because I've been logged in and everything. But I've just not been getting away from the My Mibba page...

I'm not dead. I'm just annoyingly busy and not able to post anything at the moment. Hopefully I should be able to again soon, but with school and trying to find a job, and going away every weekend things are hard.I promise not to let my story Op Warren die though I am determined to get it written.****I have a short story in the works, it's a slash. Which, despite my dislike of sex is most of what...

Comment on this please?Some basic rules.1. You comment first.2. One gets what one gives.3. I'll comment on anything up to a similar lenght, any type, I'd just prefer it's not got sex in. I am not a fan of sexytimes stories.4. Have fun, be truthful, but nice in doing so.****Moving on, I'm kind og taking a break form writing at the moment, I've not got my muse for like chapters and stuff. So I'm...

I'm 15, nearly 16 and today I still love cartoons as much as I did when I was five. But heres the thing. There just aren't any cartoons nowadays.I mean there's Spongebob, but in comparison with older things, it's lame. And after that, are there any other cartoons for kids now? Are there. I'm trying my hardest, but I honestly can't think of any.When I was younger, say ten years ago, I was five, and...

Katie, you must not let this become a thing. You have to go back to school in 5 days! You need to be getting up before 2pm. Therefore you need to be sleeping before 3am....This is f*cking bugging me. My sleeping pattern, which was never great, is gone mad. It hasn’t happened this badly in over a year. I’ve never been a great sleeper (actually, lie), I’m a great sleeper. I just have trouble...

This journal is really quite pointless, but I've not written anything in a while and I need summit to do. Skip way down if you are here for comment swap.Greys Anatomy/Grays Anatomy (I'm not sure of the correct spelling, and I dont want to google it because honestly I prefer the spelling Grey) finally came back to Ireland. I've been waiting the best part of a year it feels for it to come back, even...

Dear Katie,It's me. Or you, whatever you like kid.I've somehow discovered the secret to sending mail to the past. We shall be famous forever.So, I'm you, but I'm 16 (rounding up there child, I'll hit the big one six in about 18 days. ><)The thing is, I want to tell you so many things, but half of them could change the person we turn out to be, and despite alot of the stuff that's going on,...

I shant be around for the actual Christmas and New Year as I'm going away to visit family.So I'll say it now.IwishyouallaveryMerryMibbmas.AndaMibbaNewYear!:EAlso, since I wont be here, as a Christmas present, could you guys maybe comment on these two stories?What do you want for Christmas?AND/ORLetters to Cali.Both are stories which mean alot to me, the former more than the latter as it deals with...

Dear Global Warming,I'm sorry we were such meanies when you were here. But please, I cant take anymore of this. I miss you. Please, PLEASE come back.Yours Sincerely,Kitty, Becka, Claire, and any and all others who wish the snow would bloody well piss off.~~~~~~~~I am:dying, bleeding, coughing, annoyed, cold, and f*cking knackeredSo, this is just a bad week for me, I have the worst cold ever. I...

I need someone to help me out.My story Letters to Cali, it's full of smallish spelling mistakes. And I'd really appreciate it if one of you could like, proofread some of my chapters, and just point out to me where the mistakes are. I've taken a few weeks off from posting for the exact reason of going through the chapters. And fixing mistakes.But I cant do it alone, I've read, edited and reread the...

So, I dont know if any of you read my story Letters to Cali.I'm not going to ask if you do.I just have some information about it.I'm putting it on hold until after the holidays.So, I'll be writing, just not updating, yanno?There will however be updates from the 10th Januray.~~~~So I have this new story idea, infact I've already started writing it.But I want some opinions on the story idea I...

I find this to be hilarious.So, me, and my bestest friend ever, are going over there, to have some legal se*ytimes.~~~~~Moving on.How were you guys days?Mine was ite. Got into school ridic early agian. Wandered around the class for about ten minutes while Mr G was writing on our wall. (We have this big calander up, so he wasn't writing on the actual wall.) Then he asked me about the Garden...

So, I've been reading abit lately, though, that's not exactly a rarity.I always read, and I've just finished The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas. Which is a good book, until the last three or four pages. Then it gets quite depressing.But a good book nontheless.....Some other books I've read recently areeeee,The Hunger Games books by, Suzanne Collins, well, I've read the first one, and most of the...

I changed my username, I used to be Katniss, just letting ye know.Yo.I've got some things to ask yall, the people who use the journals section, they tend to kind of come in groups. There's certain people who's journal's you will always read and/or comment on, just because they're your friend, or summit. Not necissarily because it's a topic you're into.So, I was who are the people who's journal's...

Hiyis,So, I'm writing this story, some of you may know it, some of you may not. I call it, Letters to Cali. It's one of the best things I've written of recent.But anyway, here's the dealio.It's set in Chicago, a city I know little about. Why it's set there, I do not know, I think I just had a friend name American cities. Anyhow,I need some places, like, real places,Area names, a few street names...