Hey, thanks for your comment on When We First Met Haha, never noticed I had overused the action of them cocking their heads to the side... My bad. Hahaha. Will try to make sure I don't do that in future stories Thanks for the feedback!
Again, thank you so much for the comments on "Second Chance"! Like I said, I wrote the story quite a while ago and therefore don't remember most of it, so I can't really comment much on things. However, I am sorry that the ending wasn't to your liking. From memory, it was one of the stories that I grew to hate and just wanted to finish, so I can imagine it was pretty shitty.
Regardless, thank you for taking the time to read it.
Thank you so much for your comment on "Second Chance"! It's been a long while since I wrote the story, so I don't even remember the part that you've mentioned, but that does indeed sound weird. =P If I were to re-write, that definitely wouldn't be in there!
First off, I just want to thank you for taking the time to read "Speechless". As you could see the story wasn't the best, it was one of my first major works and it has a LOT of flaws. I never spell checked anything and I was young...really really young. I do not regret the story, but it is on my to do list to go back and fix it up.
Thank you for commenting on my one shots. I'm glad you enjoyed them. As for Johnny getting clothes on, I only did that because showing up at the hospital in boxers didn't seem ideal...haha.
hey its been a long day and I'm about to crash! so I'm logging off! I will this weekend when I have the house to my self work on updating the story of mine you love! just letting you know! yes its my computer I just like to work on my stuff when its just me in the house. I know it sounds strange, but I think most writers are the same way. They don't want no one bugging them when their writing. by the way if you have any friends on here you think id get a long with great have them ad me and message me too! I've been gone to long I lost to many friends on here! anyway TTYL have X-Rated fun in Shadzland!
First of all, the account I recommended was one of NY roleplay partners and had recommended me, so I was being nice and returning the favor. Second of all, I can recommend whoever and whatever I want.
Oh, it just means like for the "insert big number" time :)... 26th time, for instance, or 8th time, etc. I don't know if it's exactly proper to use or anything but I know I'm not the only who does *shrug. I just never think of a number on the spot and figure that 'umth' fits good enough so that anyone can imagine it to be a big number of their own...maybe I'll just start throwing out a number instead :)
And there sort of isn't one. They just used to cross paths on a regular basis when she worked close by where he used to live a few years back, but that's about it. Sorry for the confusion!
@ mrsmshadz Okay thanks for the input! I guess I just didn't notice any of that since I hung onto it for two weeks before posting? (I think that's how long it was.) I probably just kept adding and adding as I looked over it each time , because you're right they're usually quick... and this one really wasn't. But anyways, I'm always working on it and it really helps to get that kind of feedback. I'll look over the chapter when I can and see what I can do with it to make it less boring, or at least, work on the next update with all of this in mind.♥
Hey there! Just coming around to answer your questions. :) It may benefit you to read the second chapter over with the idea that for the entire first half we're seeing Michelle's side of things. Kim is Val's child with another man, and what exactly happened there will be addressed in the next chapter--don't worry. :P Annnd both girls are seventeen, though Haven is a bit younger having only turned seventeen in late March, while Kim turned seventeen in November. The kids were born when Matt was around 22, so that makes him 39. Hope this clears things up!
Idk how to take it actually. I love the story, don't get me wrong, but there was just so much description for every single thing. Got kinda bored with this update. That's why it took me awhile to read it and then I had to reread it to understand who you were talking about. I don't think the other chapters were like this last one. Idk this is just my opinion though.
*catches said bolder you threw at me 17 days ago* I SWEAR TO GOD IF I KEPT UP WITH MY COMMENTS I WOULD BE A BETTER PERSON.
Thank you SO much for your support with Lost :D I'm going to update it today, and it's going to go places that might be... well... *le sigh* filthy. xD I'm excited.