Marah Elaine / Comments

@ Marah Elaine

Yeah, the way this site is set up (and the fact that this is on an electronic screen) makes all the lines jumble up all together if their isn't a gap every now and then. I'll go read it now.

@ SecretPiggyMafia
"This Must Be Heaven" and thank you, I will go and change that now.

@ Marah Elaine

I looked at "Is This Heaven?" I think it was called. You may want to make it into 2 or 3 paragraphs. One big block of text is hard to read.

@ SecretPiggyMafia
Hello! Thank you for welcoming me to this site! Have you read any of my work yet?

Hello! Thank you for the welcoming to this site! Have you read any of my work yet?

Hi there! Welcome to Mibba!