Hey guy's, thought I'd like to put it out there that I'm trying to write a book, and get it published, if you've read my work on here, I would love to know what you think of my work, and how I can improve on it, and if any of you would like to read it just let me know. Alright hope to hear from you prospective readers!! I would love some creative criticism, and find a way to improve my writing. I...