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  • Queen of the Clouds

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    Hi there! So, I was wondering if you wouldn't mind going back to the chapter you reviewed and pointing out the spelling and grammar errors that you saw. Obviously, I didn't spot them, and I'd love to know what they are so I can fix it! Also, if you could point out cliché and stiff descriptions and how you'd suggest making them better, I'd also really appreciate it. You're the only one who has actually given suggested changing some things, so I'd love some more detail! :)
    July 2nd, 2012 at 01:35pm
  • lucymadeley

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    Thank you for your comment, and im glad you liked it. The only reason i have lyrics instead of another description is im not very good at descriptions and im also not good at planning my work so im not entirely sure what is going to happen later on in the story, so i will probably add more to the description as the story develops, but i really appreciate your comment so thanks :-)
    June 21st, 2012 at 10:59am
  • LookingForSophie

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    Hey, thank you for the comment! :) I agree, I think the first few chapters are probably going to be re-written soon. As I re-read over them they are pretty poor quality, and it makes me kind of ashamed :P Thank you for the feedback and I shall be sure to take into consideration what you said! :)
    June 21st, 2012 at 01:05am
  • Monochromatic Bliss;

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    Thank you for commenting on my story, I'm very glad that you enjoyed it.

    Haha, yes, I know. ^-^'
    I'm an absolutely horrific speller. As for the changing of tenses: I didn't notice I actually did that. Good spot :D Thank you. ^^
    Motives... I just really wanted a sort of cutesy way to end it, haha. xDDD

    Thank you for your feedback, it's much appreciated! <3
    June 18th, 2012 at 04:44am
  • The Color Wini

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    I'm glad everything's good with you too :)
    February 25th, 2012 at 07:56pm
  • The Color Wini

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    Don't push yourself, I understand how school and life is :)

    And it's going great thanks! :)
    February 25th, 2012 at 07:11pm
  • The Color Wini

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    I care that the story is unfinished :(

    I hope life is treating you well <3
    February 25th, 2012 at 07:01pm
  • The Color Wini

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    I miss you.
    February 25th, 2012 at 06:19pm
  • durand

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    I preciate that
    September 21st, 2011 at 06:24am
  • Eye Of Truth

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    I'm good, trying to write a novel , real hard work
    June 14th, 2011 at 11:54pm
  • Eye Of Truth

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    Long time no talk! How are you?!
    June 14th, 2011 at 06:59pm
  • The Color Wini

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    I was in Essex on the internet at my boyfriend's house.
    I'm not back really, sorry =/
    June 2nd, 2011 at 05:57pm
  • Jessii Tara;

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    cool MCR is awesome!
    March 16th, 2011 at 11:31pm
  • Jessii Tara;

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    ...the comment on my poem I mean.

    I see your a fan of Mikey Way :) he's awesome
    March 16th, 2011 at 10:32pm
  • Jessii Tara;

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    thanks. :)
    March 16th, 2011 at 02:32pm
  • zaner

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    Your comment made my day! Thank you so much.
    March 2nd, 2011 at 04:13am
  • Thegreatunspoken

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    [i]No One Sleeps While I'm Awake[/i] has been updated!
    November 29th, 2010 at 03:34am
  • poorsadpoofy

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    awesome, that would be great!
    November 25th, 2010 at 12:39am
  • poorsadpoofy

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    yeah i feel you on the ideas part.
    well, i'll always be looking out for one, :D
    and your welcome. i love it.
    November 24th, 2010 at 08:31pm
  • The Color Wini

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    Hi Nikki,

    Just thought I'd drop you a line and let you know that I've updated [b]Retrace The Steps We Took When We Met[/b]
    November 20th, 2010 at 08:51pm
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