WaterQueen07 / Comments

Hi there! So, I was wondering if you wouldn't mind going back to the chapter you reviewed and pointing out the spelling and grammar errors that you saw. Obviously, I didn't spot them, and I'd love to know what they are so I can fix it! Also, if you could point out cliché and stiff descriptions and how you'd suggest making them better, I'd also really appreciate it. You're the only one who has actually given suggested changing some things, so I'd love some more detail! :)

Thank you for your comment, and im glad you liked it. The only reason i have lyrics instead of another description is im not very good at descriptions and im also not good at planning my work so im not entirely sure what is going to happen later on in the story, so i will probably add more to the description as the story develops, but i really appreciate your comment so thanks :-)

Hey, thank you for the comment! :) I agree, I think the first few chapters are probably going to be re-written soon. As I re-read over them they are pretty poor quality, and it makes me kind of ashamed :P Thank you for the feedback and I shall be sure to take into consideration what you said! :)

Thank you for commenting on my story, I'm very glad that you enjoyed it.

Haha, yes, I know. ^-^'
I'm an absolutely horrific speller. As for the changing of tenses: I didn't notice I actually did that. Good spot :D Thank you. ^^
Motives... I just really wanted a sort of cutesy way to end it, haha. xDDD

Thank you for your feedback, it's much appreciated! <3

I'm glad everything's good with you too :)

Don't push yourself, I understand how school and life is :)

And it's going great thanks! :)

I care that the story is unfinished :(

I hope life is treating you well <3

I miss you.

I preciate that

I'm good, trying to write a novel , real hard work

Long time no talk! How are you?!

I was in Essex on the internet at my boyfriend's house.
I'm not back really, sorry =/

cool MCR is awesome!

...the comment on my poem I mean.

I see your a fan of Mikey Way :) he's awesome

thanks. :)

Your comment made my day! Thank you so much.

[i]No One Sleeps While I'm Awake[/i] has been updated!

awesome, that would be great!

yeah i feel you on the ideas part.
well, i'll always be looking out for one, :D
and your welcome. i love it.

Hi Nikki,

Just thought I'd drop you a line and let you know that I've updated [b]Retrace The Steps We Took When We Met[/b]