Ok to the few people who read my story. I gotta know what you think! I'm struggling for inspriation. Please give me feed back. Love it, hate it, eh, just let me know!!! Anyway, I have a clear vision in my head, I just need to know what people think. I want to improve my writing skills and this way I can feed back from other writers, and that would really help alot. Please anything will do. I know...