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  • november rain;

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    Hey. Just here to let you know that the "Little Things In A New Perspective" Contest deadline has been extended till the 26th until further notice.

    If you need to pull out or exchange your object, please let me know. Thank you! :]
    September 18th, 2009 at 04:58am
  • toesofthetickledkind

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    Thank you!

    Also, if you can think of something you'd like to write about I'll co-write something with you :)
    September 17th, 2009 at 07:31am
  • Lady Nikki Nightmare

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    hey... idk if you remember me, (I wrote how could this happen to me)
    and I was just wanting to tell you about this awesome contest idea
    that I had... so please check it out if you have time and if you know
    anyone else who liked How Could this happen please feel free to tell
    them about it as well... the link is: http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/post/5446387/#5446387
    September 12th, 2009 at 12:47am
  • vintageharlequins

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    I know right.
    I dunno, they’re all just crazy lol.
    I mean, sure, I think that for certain stories to be believable, they require sex. It is a major aspect of life. But the way some of these girls write just freaks the crap out of me. It’s either completely unrealistic, or there’s way too much and it overpowers everything else. I can’t find anything that holds my interest all the way to the end. And I’ve never found a story that I couldn’t predict the ending to by the third chapter. Hmmm, maybe I’m just too harsh a critic. Although, I can’t complain too much. I mean, my shit is far from perfect lol.
    September 1st, 2009 at 01:53am
  • vintageharlequins

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    i've noticed that.
    i mean, i've found one or two that i thought were cute, but the majority are just about ryan and brendon screwing all the time. i dont get it, do girls want them to be gay or something? lol.
    August 31st, 2009 at 10:49pm
  • vintageharlequins

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    thanks.
    im glad you like it.
    i keep thinking that its not as good as it could be though.
    August 30th, 2009 at 07:21am
  • Airi.

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    I'd laugh if he actually did it. xD
    My friends already tease me about it a lot... But I don't need it becoming any worse. -.-'
    August 29th, 2009 at 01:11am
  • Airi.

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    I um... Haven't figured that out yet. xD I was planning on sending him the link to the birthday one shot I'm planning on writing but then it occured to me I don't think he'd appreciate it and he would also need to make an account on this site. xD I'm still thinking of something to send him. >.<
    I ask him weird questions. One consisted of asking him to wear a dress and take a picture. XD
    I'm going to take the safe route and just do the Internet. That way, my mother will never know and neither will my friends so I'll never be teased about it. : D
    August 28th, 2009 at 04:10am
  • Leaving;

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    haha i just might =]
    August 27th, 2009 at 03:48am
  • roe.

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    You're welcome. (:
    August 27th, 2009 at 01:21am
  • pretty monsters

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    It's okay, we're all silent subscribers for some story.
    At least you're reading it! :)
    August 26th, 2009 at 10:38pm
  • pretty monsters

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    Thank you for your comment on Smile for the Paparazzi. It made me laugh. :)
    August 25th, 2009 at 09:36pm
  • erin.whatserface.

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    Cool, dude.
    No problem. :)

    Good luck with the contest. :D
    August 25th, 2009 at 03:47am
  • erin.whatserface.

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    Don't worry about it.
    I don't mind the questions. :)

    I guess it was a little of both; the layout was spaced rather tightly and the font was rather small, so it contributed. What messed with my eyes the most was the lack of spacing. I realize you did all the paragraphs by song, but I personally thought it would have flowed better with more paragraphs so that the eye could follow instead of getting lost amidst one giant paragraph after the other. That's just me, though; I loved the writing, it was just hard for me to physically read it.
    August 25th, 2009 at 02:47am
  • erin.whatserface.

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    ...when did you contact me before?
    Do I just fail at remembering...?
    If so, sorry. :(

    Uh, I think it was mostly the structure. Because there wasn't a lot of spacing, I found myself rereading the same thing two or three times. I don't know how exactly to resolve that problem, but it would help dramatically if you could somehow do it.

    But like I said, I enjoyed it and it was well-written. No problems there. :)
    August 23rd, 2009 at 03:38am
  • astronaut.

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    i went to wales last week.
    I GOT TO SEE RAIN!!!!! AND IT WAS BREEZY AND KIND OF CHILLY!! AND I LOVED IT!
    August 22nd, 2009 at 09:35pm
  • Alexander James.

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    Hahaha. I hope I can make 100 Chapters. I tried that once it was an epic fail. -_-
    August 22nd, 2009 at 12:51pm
  • Phenakistoscope.

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    Haha okay.
    Night love :)
    August 22nd, 2009 at 09:47am
  • Phenakistoscope.

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    Haha I do feel kinda special XD
    I thought that there would have already been one, so I was quite shocked when I found out there wasn't.
    It's gonna be difficult choosing winners though, that's for sure. I've got some vague ideas in my mind, but I'll need to go back and check. And I still have some to read XD
    August 22nd, 2009 at 09:27am
  • Phenakistoscope.

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    Yeah. I don't know exactly why, but I really did like that entry. Most of the entries I've read so far have been great. It's going to be really hard to choose winners.

    Yeah, I assumed that was why. Perhaps a bit of an explanation in the story would have come in handy. Just to avoid some confusion.

    Well I think you could have written her as twelve really well too, but the twist with Ryan kept things very interesting ;)

    No problem honey :)
    August 22nd, 2009 at 08:54am