I get that :D Honest I do lol I'm just nit picky don't mind me. The title to me, the one you have now honestly doesn't seem like...I don't know I really don't wanna be rude but it seems slightly like you're an inexperience writer. And from what I've read I can definitely see that is not true. I get the "OMG" factor off the title if you see what I mean? I don't mean to offed I'm actually making you a banner :D
uuuuhhhhh hi... i have decided that in ur pirate story, random guys did not, in fact, c her naked. i just decided that myself. i just decided 2 think that. guess i wont be able 2 read it otherwise lol
crap my grandfathers pic is in the paper today and i have to do his thing tomorrow and adu is having surgery with out me today so everything is so fucked up