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  • Haylie Jaed

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    Hey hun, it's been a while since I last heard from you. =) How're you doing? How's life going?

    Hope everything is well.

    xoxo
    HJ.
    March 10th, 2012 at 09:09am
  • Haylie Jaed

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    I know EXACTLY what you mean. I moved to Mibba from a little site called FanWorks for a few reasons, but the main one was that the Avenged Sevenfold section got taken over by what my friends and I like to refer to as "New Breeds" - simply because we couldn't bare to call them writers.

    While we were writing quality work, the New Breeds would post stuff that was grammatically incorrect, horrible spelling, unformatted. Stories where you post the first chapter and then ask, "Who wants to be in my story and which of the boys do you want to be with?!" And above all, everything was about sex.

    I dared to read a random chapter from a 23-year-old New Breed, thinking she must know a little better, and I found myself in the middle of a VERY graphic threesome with the author herself, Matt and Zacky. I feel it necessary to mention that she knew full well that one of her readers was only thirteen at the time.

    She and said 13-year-old got on MSN together (with a few other people) and they did a massive, sex-filled role-play, which the 13yo then posted on the site. I completely snapped, left a comment almost 1,000 words long going on about how the rest of us were sick of having to see stuff like that and that it needed to stop. Half of them were 16 or younger for crying out loud.

    Basically, I started an all-out war. There were casualties on both sides. These days, there's only about three authors left from that period of time. Soon to be two, because once I finish posting my current story, I'm leaving for good.

    Point is, it taught me that most people on these types of sites are just hormonal teenagers who want to read about sex with their favourite bands. You just need to find the ones who are actually interested in reading proper fiction.

    Well, this has been a rant. My apologies. =P

    xoxo
    HJ.
    December 22nd, 2011 at 10:55pm
  • The Dodger

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    Sorry it took so long for me to relpy. Was on vacation in Minnesota haha
    glad to hear you liked the update! I'll try to work on the end of the story during the rest of my holiday break :D
    December 20th, 2011 at 11:10pm
  • The Dodger

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    I think I have only one or two more chapters to write actually, and I'm brainstorming the layout of the ending atm. Thanks for getting on me to finish this, I really needed it. The relationship between Harper and Brian is so complicated and I really didn't mean for it to be. It just sort of happened. I wanted her to grow to love him, but more in a platonic/brotherly way, y'know? The one between Jack and Harper is severely lacking. I meant to put more interaction between the two other than their scenes where they're at each other's throats. Oh well, I have time to work on that.
    December 10th, 2011 at 03:12am
  • The Dodger

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    I updated Haunted, thanks to you. :D
    December 9th, 2011 at 10:07pm
  • starlight886

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    Thank you so much, your comment on Open Your Eyes totally made my day. Week even. Haha. I always love hearing if people enjoy my writing or not. So thank you again for posting that. :)
    December 9th, 2011 at 10:07am
  • The Dodger

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    Thank you so much! I actually found a half of a chapter I never got done so hopefully the next update will come sooner than I thought!
    December 8th, 2011 at 03:40pm
  • Haylie Jaed

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    Yep, I truly did love that chapter. =) But I understand what you mean about finding it tedious - I've written my fair share of those. But it looks like it paid off. ;)

    Number one fan, absolutely! XD

    xoxo
    HJ.
    December 8th, 2011 at 11:18am
  • The Dodger

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    O.o oh my god. Thank you so much for the comment on Haunted. This gives me so much more motivation to finish it. Yeah sorry to say it's not quite finished. Hopefully after my exams week I can start working on it again. I really can't tell you how much I appreciate feedback like that
    December 7th, 2011 at 03:12am
  • PinkMartini

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    Thank you so much for the comment on 'Little Girl Blue'. :3 And by the by, that's a nice profile you have there.
    November 23rd, 2011 at 08:52pm
  • confetti boy.

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    YOUR
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    SEXY.
    Just saying. :) <3
    April 5th, 2011 at 07:19am
  • ChemicallyImbalanced

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    I love your icon. XD
    April 3rd, 2011 at 05:51am
  • quinn allman's hair.

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    yeah, not what it was anymore.
    considered fucking it off a bit myself lol

    yeah, life's not completely awful :']
    body mods and working are about the extent of it at the moment. got dad's birthday/deathday on my left wrist yesterday and my ears are at eight mm at the moment. just waiting on my one cm spirals to arrive in the mail :3
    lost another friend in a car accident the other day though. that's three so far. and the local paper called it "the curse of '06" the fuckers :|

    how're things with you?
    January 7th, 2011 at 03:32am
  • quinn allman's hair.

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    mel. megan's gone.
    deactivated.
    fuck me, eh.

    life has to go on i spose.
    miss you smidge x
    December 30th, 2010 at 02:38pm
  • marcus mumford

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    Thanks, man. :]
    December 18th, 2010 at 12:02am
  • bateman

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    mel
    October 24th, 2010 at 11:12pm
  • carcinogenic.

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    your profile is great. :3
    August 16th, 2010 at 06:21am
  • hey sailor

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    I'm gooood. How about you?
    Yuppers. Check out ckyalliance.com for the details and all that jazz.
    June 17th, 2010 at 07:04pm
  • hey sailor

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    HEY MEL.
    I haven't talked to you in forever.
    And I have some exciting news if you still like cKy.
    THEY ARE GOING TO NEW ZEALAND!
    But yeah.
    I found out, and thought of you.
    <3 Anjilika.
    June 16th, 2010 at 05:49am
  • Rocket Queen

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    HAPPY BIRTHDAY! :D
    June 6th, 2010 at 07:43am