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You're killing me! Please update soon! I check my feed at least ten times a day to see if there's an update from you!

You're very welcome I'm going to read the rest of it as well Im just a little slow to read

I really liked it! I can't wait for more!

Ooh, good observation :)
Yes the origin of the feather will be reveled, but it'll be a few chapters from now, though.

It's no problem! I really like Mikayla and Frank! I feel bad that Mikayla doesn't really have any friends her own age and that everyone at her school just seems to assume what type of person she is. I think youre setting up hers and Frank's relationship together really well also

Good obvious and you know I love it baby!

Hey thanks ever so much for the comments on My Constant Companion. So glad you love it as much as I do.
You made some great points. Yes, Izzie's hallucinations on Grey's was an inspiration, even though that years back it was stuck in my head. Plus just the idea of imaginary friends or things only you can see, things that may or may not be real fascinates me, especially when those things become reality.
I was hoping the story was making sense to the readers, and not just to me, so yes I tried to put in as much detail as possible without overdoing it, hopefully I did it right. And I liked the phone scene as well, it's what I would do if no one could see the person I was talking to, makes you seem a little less crazy, lol.

You're welcome. Glad to give you an insight of what I am thinking. I think it's helpful to see what readers think how the story is going to turn out and what they think of the characters which is why I encourage my readers to give me feedback of what they think. I honestly dislike it when they just say the typical 'Great update' or 'Love it' over and over again, it's like basically telling me that you didn't read it or just going through the motions and don't care for the story at all. I rather have people not comment than give me those simple comments. I do think they will be adorkable together and I think it's true. Mikayla has been pushing herself to be the very best even if it's breaking her from all the stress it creates and usually that will transfer to any relationship she will have. Straining herself is something she does naturally I assume. Oh, I hear you. I hate it when they go down that road because it doesn't make sense, doing and hearing about it are two completely different things. I'm happy to hear that you aren't one of those writers that makes the girl so experienced despite her being a virgin or inexperienced.

You're welcome. You deserved a long comment and I missed the previous chapter so yeah haha I tend to get chatty. I think the relationship between Frank and Mikayla might be a little awkward since Mikayla doesn't have a lot of experience in the dating department so she might share some of that awkwardness. Also, she might stress out about it since she tends to be a perfectionist and might not want to disappoint Frank in any way. I feel like Mikayla might be unstable in the relationship if she feels pressured to do anything. Frank might be able to help with that in some ways, he might turn into a blabbering idiot around her, hence the third chapter, but he will be good for her...possibly. So they can be adorkable together haha. As for them getting closer before the relationship, I believe they still might be uncomfortable around one another once the feelings start to develop. Frank obviously felt weird when he realized the huge age difference, so he might be hesitant and since Mikayla isn't the type that is likely to take the reigns of the situation. She might let it be or surprise all of us and strap up her boots, stuck it up and tell Frank how she feels and how to go about things. What do you think?

No problem, you're so talented! :')

Thank you for your comment:) The idea came from just about every cartoon from the late 90s ever. Haha!

I might just have to write one then!

I love Ray.
I might write a chaptered story about him.

I'm Abigail-Louise

Thank you for the story comment!

Thank you very much for your story comment on Lilith! (: I really appreciate your criticism. I've changed the layout, I've also written a new summary, because I see your point exactly. The summary and disclaimer were kind of just stand-ins for the moment, until I had time to write proper ones, so I hope the current is better than what I had. (: I hope you'll check the story out again.

Oh! I so knew that. I was kind of out of it when I wrote the last comment, because a long day of work can do that to you. ;A; I thought you meant that my comment got sent twice, haha. Sorry xD

You're welcome! x2, I guess, haha.

I didn't know I sent two of them, I guess I must have clicked send twice, because I was impatient at the slowness of my internet. xD Sorry about that, haha.

You're welcome. Your story is incredibly amazing and got hooked on it after the first chapter. It was an easy read and didn't make my head hurt like so many others after reading chapter after chapter. It was refreshing to read something so new.

Well thank you for the story comment! I do agree, I regrettably have a bit of an amateur vocabulary in general, and I'll take a look into my summary, but so far, you're the only one who has given me some criticism on its length.

I'm so glad to hear their relationship was evident from the beginning. And the cliche-ness of some of it? Would you agree if I said that Zayn does seem a little head-over-heels to the point where the reader would expect a cliche to come out of his mouth? Hehe.

anytime chicka :)