accid3nt_pr0ne / Comments

Hello! Just wanted to say that your poems are really fantastic!

http://poem.mibba.com/135313/Willow

I think you might enjoy this, as I've spent more time on it than any other poem in my life and I believe it could be the best poem I've ever written.

To the displeasure of my publisher, I've posted another poem of mine that was only to be published in my soon to be publication, since a lot of people responded so ... I was humbled. I've decided to do as you say: post another poem I've spent some time on, a poem where I "tried harder." Apparitions of a Dying Dream, it's on my page.

This is a message I left in my poem, The Death of Dawn, and I wrote a message for everyone who took the time to read that long ass poem:

All of you people, you're people, you're not a ghost behind a keyboard never known obscured by alias and anonymity, and that's why I write. For breathing, feeling, people who've taken to this sight as an island, some sort of Alexandria, and between the cracks so many of us fall into obscurity. The fact that I have not, that people seem to enjoy it, or lie about enjoying it just to make me feel better is just as touching, that's the only reason I haven't slipped through. You're the reason.

Given your positive response to a few of my lesser poems, poems I did not put much effort into at all, I thought you might enjoy reading a poem I've put real effort in. I usually don't publish my best work online and save them for my publications, but a friend has talked me into it and if you'd like to check it out, the title is The Death of Dawn. I figured you might like to see what I'm capable of when I try. It'd be my honor for your opinion on it.