Please do message me! I'm trying to get all of those flaws out in my editing but its hard because my plot line changed so much through the story :/ hahaha I can tell you the original plot line if you message me! You'll see just how much it changed!
Thanks for your comment on Storms in Utopia - I really want to update again sometime soon. To tell you the truth I'm not sure why I haven't already done it. I haven't written for so long - life just got in the way - that it almost feels weird going back to it.
Thanks so much for your comments on my stories! It's really great to hear that you're enjoying both of them, and I know what you mean about the lack of stories set in Britain. :D
Thank you so much for the comments on my poetry, especially the one on Her Charcoal Gospel! I really love it when people take the time to pay attention to details and write long comments. You seriously just made my day much better. Thank you very much! :)