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I wasn't trying to ruin the new episode for you - I'm sorry!

But I am super glad that you enjoyed the chapter! I was trying to build things up slowly, without jumping into anything or making it seem to rushed. I'll get more up soon!

Aha, I wasn't even trying to make it similar to Sparrow, but you're right, it is. And you can't exactly blame him for it. Wouldn't you be worried, too? I mean, she jumps across a courtyard into a balcony, then jumps over a rail into the sea.

But next chapter will be more of the two of them getting closer. I actually really think you're going to like it.... well, I hope you like it. Amira ends up simply doing instead of thinking and actually admits something big to herself.

I'm more terrified than anything. two exams today and then meeting with my advisor to go over some last minute stuff with an internship I had this semester and I should be free....

Ha, I love Prince Eric in the Disney movie, but when I saw him in the show, I was like, "that's Eric? Wait... what?" The human portrayal just seemed to be one of those annoying royals who thinks they know everything - and I'm gad that you thought it fit!

I was trying to think of something that would work for this, since they have yet to find out about the dagger that controls him. I read something about the talisman being able to control demons, it's lore from the MIddle East, so I thought it fit.

And yeah, Killian should have planned a little better, but just wait for the next chapter - it's the "escape plan" and Amira is the one who ends up saving them. I'm super gad that you liked it and I promise to get more out soon!

The'll kiss, but all in good time. You just have to wait for it. And yes, he is going to have her help him steal something in the next chapter. It's going to be something that would help them defeat the Dark One.

I agree, Felix is the most loyal of them all - I kind of want to know his back story to see who he clings onto Pan like that, you know? And I know exactly what you mean with the whole Hook/Emma thing, and I blame it all on Neal. Can I take a moment to formally accuse him? He just needs to go away... again. He did it before, he should have no problem leaving her a second time.

Aha, I'll get more up soon!

Yeah, finals start first week of December and I graduate on the 13th! I'm so excited to have my degree and be done with school Thanks, I'm going to need the good vibes - I'm already in the, "I don't care about school any more, I've already got a job lined up for the new year" thinking, so studying for the exams are going to be a pain...

As for the teasing, wait about four chapters and It'll get a little more interesting. But you can't blame me. If she were to bed him in a heartbeat then where would the story go? It's all about anticipation and building up to it =D

@ Your.Desi.Girl
Ooh, graduation! How exciting! Are you heading to finals soon?
I send good vibes your way. :)

Having an attractive guy friend is a good thing. Hahah. I got a few of those. Good eye candy and great friendship. Hahahah!

Annnnd I can't wait for the fluff! It's such a tease though. Forever tease!

You will find out Amira's back story, but not right now. She doesn't trust him just yet, bust she'll let him in eventually... I just realized how that could be taken in another way... aha. And yes, it's bad that he got hurt, but she's gonna take care of him.

My weekend was good, I got a few chapters written for this, so that's always a good thing. But I'm looking forward to Thanksgiving this weekend, meaning I'm one step closer to graduation.

Ha, yeah, the guy is pretty awesome - like I said, it's kinda freaky how similar we are. And yes, I am just going to wait and see what happens. Even if I just end up not taking a real interest in him, beyond the fact that he's kinda attractive, he's the type of guy who will be a good friend, and that's something I need.

But I promise to get more up soon! Up next is more cutesy fluff between them, and Amira realizes that she might like him a little.

I'm sorry! It's my mom's birthday so I'm going to go see her. But I'm glad that you liked the update!

Don't worry, he won't get himself killed - he's just got a smart mouth that gets him in trouble... but that's one of the reasons we love him. I'll be back with more on Monday!

@ Your.Desi.Girl
Right? I just love his eyes. Super sexy. Haha.

Yeah, in a weird way... but Hook brought Bae onto the Jolly Roger and kinda looked after him for a little while, too... this is just so confusing. But Hook is sexy and I like looking at him, aha

@ Your.Desi.Girl
I think you got that right. So, in reality, Hook is Henry's step-grandfather because he was with Bae's mother? They didn't marry or anything, but for the sake of the family tree, it could have happened.

So, pretty much everyone is related and that is why the Bae/Emma/Hook love triangle is creepy. x.x

Lets see if I can map this out...

Snow's mother dies when she's a child and her father remarries Regina. Regina is the daughter of prince Henry and Cora. Cora fell in love with Rumplestiltskin while she was trying to become queen. Regina becomes the stepmother of Snow, who marries Charming, the twin brother of Prince James.

Snow and Charming have a daughter named Emma. Emma has a son who she gives up for adoption. Regina adopts her great-grandson as her own son after he's brought to her by Rumplestiltskin. Henry's father is Baelfire, who is the son of Rumplestiltskin. Rumplestiltskin is the son of Peter Pan, who is going to kill Henry, his own great-grandson, in order to gain immortality.

Then there's Hook, who is shining up to Emma, but was also in love with Bae's mother 300 years ago and swore revenge upon Rumplestiltskin for killing her.

Is that right or did I miss something?

@ Your.Desi.Girl
I know right? I bet the family tree is insane. Haha!

Haha, I had to pay tribute to Sparrow - he is what comes to mind when I think pirate after all.

I don't do the whole social media thing [I know, gasp] so I had no idea what was coming our way. I liked Peter before [in a weird, twisted kinda way] but now that I know he's Rumple's father I'm just like... wow. He's Rumple's father. If Hook is over 300 years old, how old is he? 1,000 years?

Ha, can you imagine the family tree for this show?

Aw, thank you! I'm so happy to hear that I'm conveying the story in a way that you can relate to and such.

Hi! First off, I'm stoked to know that you decided to check out the story and continue reading past the first paragraph!

I'm so glad to hear that you're liking it so far - I wasn't sure of the idea. I'll get the next part up either today or tomorrow.

Thanks for your comment on Cigarette Smoke! I'm glad you like it! :)

Here's a link to your review Searching. I hope you like it!

@ KatieMosing
That's an honor! Let me know when you are finished, I would love to read it. c:

Hey! I just wanted to let you know that I'm going to be doing a review of your story, Searching, for the Mibba Magazine!