when someone pours their heart and soul out onto a blank page, and then posts it up on a site like this, they want feedback. did you like it? did it suck? what was so bad about it? what can i do to make it better? every poem ive read ive commented on because i know that to have a comment about a poem you wrote is a really really good feeling. i dont know about other writers but i write to create...

ok so my poem Ode to an Angel has a bit of a story behind it, and i feel like im cheating anyone who is reading it since they dont know. Well, you see, my father is a lawyer and one of his clients was a girl who got burned REALLY REALLy bad. it was crazy, her arms, legs, back, face, all of it. they even had a amputate her left leg from the knee down. her hands are permantly in a curl, her...

mmkay so im new to mibba, and this site is wayyyyy big. its crazy there is so much info stuff to fill in, its like myspace times 10. so yea, just getting the feel of it. cant wait to have friends yay! :........and its telling me that my entry is too short so im gonna have to lengthin it. alrighty then, well im sitting on a couple of stories that i just cant seem to get out but maybe if i start and...