Thank you for your comment on Tune It In, Tune Out, it means a lot to me that you took the time to do so. It's my first original chaptered story and I do plan on updating it within the next week or so.
Oh I get it now! Well bonus points for originality, I've never read a cannibal-themed story before. As for you mistakes, I was talking about spacing your paragraphs are dialogue. There were, if any at all, spelling issues. But the main thing is space. I was probably the absolute worst when I first started but it's a super easy fix
Yes, I did take Sanguinare Vampiris from Elder Scrolls. But if I'm correct it has been used in vampire novels and things alike. Though I could be mistaken. xD
For me to go into writers block, I'd start a complete and total new story. Lmfao. It'll take me a while and for me to go into it would mean that I would uh, what's it called... Hm... be sort of improving then I'd lose intrest in the story. XD
Ooooh! I apologize for my misinterpretation of it. That's actually quite fascinating and makes amazing sense now. I usually take the colors from the background I use or the picture I use for the title. I can't really wreck you colors since it depends on that but sites like DeviantArt, tumblr, weheartit are great places to find pictures to fit with your story.
Yeah. :S I will write more I'm honestly am basically free-writing it then typing it later. I type it in halfs because I'm almost at writing 16 pages per chapter (getting longer too. I want to get to a decent amount of words per chapter). So it's basically a work in progress and I'm happy that you're subscribed. :D
Thanks for the comment on Beautiful Barbie, I really appreciate it. And thanks. :S And about Victoria, yeah, she kind of seems like a bitch. I think I will make her seem that way for a few more chapters or so. It's just I really haven't read any stories/books with a bitchy main character who is honestly really consited and cruel in that way. I don't know why, but I like my main character for that reason. Probably because she's different? Lol. Now I forget what I have to say so I'm just going to post this. :S
I reply quickly because, to be honest, I'm high. Joke, I'm kidding. Comments make my day.